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RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 07:47 PM
Alright....this is my first wall...so...er...be nice.

http://marneons.com/Anime_DigiCharat.jpg

**edit**
Here's version 2... I'm editing this post so new people coming in don't have to scroll to find the newest version. ^^;

http://marneons.com/Anime_DigiCharatV2.jpg

jumomo
11-22-2003, 07:58 PM
you should use another mainpicture ... one without edges ... and without flying lamps ... :D

_hades the wicked
11-22-2003, 08:02 PM
I think it's very nice for a start. Keep up the good work.

RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 22 2003, 07:52 PM
you should use another mainpicture ... one without edges ... and without flying lamps ... :D
Technically the lamps AREN'T flying...

They're both on stands. You can see the stand on the left lantern...the the right one is behind the flowers.

jumomo
11-22-2003, 08:20 PM
ehehem ... sorry ... it was only fun ...
but you should do something with that picture anyway ... maybe deleting the picture background

RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 08:25 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 22 2003, 08:14 PM
ehehem ... sorry ... it was only fun ...
but you should do something with that picture anyway ... maybe deleting the picture background
Hmn...well...I did delete some of the background...I guess I could get rid of the latern behind Puchiko...and those green flowers....

But I can't really do anything about the lantern on the right or the flowers because they cover part of Digi's head & kimono.... hmn... I did try reconstructing her ear left ear....but it looked icky.

Any suggestions? -_-

jumomo
11-22-2003, 09:10 PM
you should do like this here ...

RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 10:05 PM
VERSION 2!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!

http://marneons.com/Anime_DigiCharatV2.jpg

jumomo
11-22-2003, 10:18 PM
yes ! thats what i mean ! looks much better now !

RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 10:21 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 22 2003, 10:12 PM
yes ! thats what i mean ! looks much better now !
*huggs* Thank you SOOO much!!!! :wub:

jumomo
11-22-2003, 10:23 PM
ahaha ... youre welcome :D

darkparrot
11-22-2003, 10:33 PM
I am sure that someone has already seen this, but there is a black spot on the lower right by the flowers. Other then that exelent job!

MistressPookyChan
11-22-2003, 10:54 PM
it's cute, but the edges are a bit jagged. Also, the background and the image itself do not blend together. It is a good first step in the right direction, so keep working at it! :D

RedHeadOtaku
11-22-2003, 11:01 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 22 2003, 10:48 PM
it's cute, but the edges are a bit jagged. Also, the background and the image itself do not blend together. It is a good first step in the right direction, so keep working at it! :D
Hmn... *stares at it a bit* Well, I took the green from Digi's hair and the pink from Rabi's hair...and blended them together for the background...

Or do you mean like...the lighting thing doesn't blend with the image?

MistressPookyChan
11-23-2003, 12:06 AM
I mean that it looks like you just cut the image out and pasted it onto a background. maybe it's because the image appears washed out or maybe it's missing something...