Rubedo, the Crystal Blood
01-22-2009, 01:05 PM
I'm listening to Aya Hirano's "Lost my Music". And I've been trying to translate it into English lyrically (translate it so that the words still fit the song.) The part I'm having trouble with is asterisked. I'd also appreciate any other reccomendations.
Here's a link to the song so you know how it sounds. And YES, this is from The Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi.
http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/2213254_ii8rw/02-lost-my-music.mp3
星空見上げ 私だけのヒカリ教えて(Hoshizora miage watashi dake no hikari oshiete)
(When I look up at the sky, I can't help asking why we aren't here together.)
あなたはいまどこで 誰といるのでしょう?(Anata wa ima doko de dare to iru no deshoo?)
(How I wonder where you are these days, and to whom it is you now attend?)
楽しくしてるコト思うと さみしくなって(Tanoshiku shiteru koto omoo to samishiku natte.)
(Even now I think of you and wish you were here too, instead of feeling lonely.)
一緒に観たシネマひとりきりで流す (Issho ni mita SHINEMA hitori kiri de nagasu.)
(Since that evening at the cinema, you're the only person on my mind.)
大好きなひとが遠い, 遠すぎて泣きたくなるの(Daisuki na hito ga tooi toosugite nakitaku naru no.)
(The someone that love is too far away, and the tears I hold within me blurry my sight.)
あした目が覚めたらほら, 希望が生まれるかも GOOD NIGHT!(Ashita me ga sametara hora kibou ga umareru kamo. GOOD NIGHT!)
(As the dawn horizon breaks and I awake, perhaps then I'll find a hope for myself. Good night!)
I still I still I love you!
I'm waiting waiting forever
I still I still I love you!
Tomoranai no yo! Hi!!
Finished: credits to kajigoddess and bluepenguin for your criticism and suggestions.
Here's a link to the song so you know how it sounds. And YES, this is from The Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi.
http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/2213254_ii8rw/02-lost-my-music.mp3
星空見上げ 私だけのヒカリ教えて(Hoshizora miage watashi dake no hikari oshiete)
(When I look up at the sky, I can't help asking why we aren't here together.)
あなたはいまどこで 誰といるのでしょう?(Anata wa ima doko de dare to iru no deshoo?)
(How I wonder where you are these days, and to whom it is you now attend?)
楽しくしてるコト思うと さみしくなって(Tanoshiku shiteru koto omoo to samishiku natte.)
(Even now I think of you and wish you were here too, instead of feeling lonely.)
一緒に観たシネマひとりきりで流す (Issho ni mita SHINEMA hitori kiri de nagasu.)
(Since that evening at the cinema, you're the only person on my mind.)
大好きなひとが遠い, 遠すぎて泣きたくなるの(Daisuki na hito ga tooi toosugite nakitaku naru no.)
(The someone that love is too far away, and the tears I hold within me blurry my sight.)
あした目が覚めたらほら, 希望が生まれるかも GOOD NIGHT!(Ashita me ga sametara hora kibou ga umareru kamo. GOOD NIGHT!)
(As the dawn horizon breaks and I awake, perhaps then I'll find a hope for myself. Good night!)
I still I still I love you!
I'm waiting waiting forever
I still I still I love you!
Tomoranai no yo! Hi!!
Finished: credits to kajigoddess and bluepenguin for your criticism and suggestions.