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nichunter1
12-12-2008, 12:32 PM
Well I made this for myself ^^, but I figured why not post it here to get some advice and get some proper critics :P.

Anyways I made this with the help of scans , screen shots and photoshop tools.

Hope you like it:D

Des
12-12-2008, 02:02 PM
Remove that white line thats on his back, where I have marked of.
I`ve already removed it in ps though :P
Use smudge and smudge the black color from the back and that black area to the right together.

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 02:05 PM
ahah ^^ yes indeed but my major problem in this is ahah its very ahrd to solve :P light's back and the bottom dark just blend together afterwards and it seems very odd to me so if you can help me solve that i'd be thankful :P Thx des =)

SigmaSD
12-12-2008, 02:09 PM
That looks pretty good. Did you write the words yourself, because I'm wondering what font you used.

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 02:11 PM
Sadly no.. I used a scan as for if you want I could try to look for it knowing I like it too ^^

Des
12-12-2008, 02:15 PM
Like this?

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 02:23 PM
Yeah for some reason it seems blended together the background and light and thats why it makes it look weird i think ^^





Heres the fonts sigma :

Des
12-12-2008, 02:26 PM
Hmm hmm *thinks*

Can`t figure out what you can do to change that =P

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 02:35 PM
Hmm hmm *thinks*

Can`t figure out what you can do to change that =P



Mmm I was thinking about making the back a darker greyish color light black. DO you think that would work out ?

Des
12-12-2008, 02:37 PM
I was actually thinking about amking the extract darker :p

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 02:40 PM
HAhaha yes but what is darker then black ! ^^

Des
12-12-2008, 02:49 PM
I ment darkness of the figure.
Like I`ve done now.
I know that this one looks bad becaus of some lighter spots on the figure, but it`s actually a good example of what I mean by making the figure darker.

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 03:07 PM
Edit : OMG sorry for double post i didnt see :S if needed delete it I apologize for breaking the rules

Mmmm Well i did some edit tell me what you think =)

Des
12-12-2008, 03:33 PM
It looks like he has a plank down his shirt now, the shirt is unormaly(is that a word?) straight.
A shirt has bumps you know :P

nichunter1
12-12-2008, 03:57 PM
What abotu now look last edit =)

Des
12-12-2008, 04:15 PM
Well it does look better then being straight =)

Ωmega
12-12-2008, 05:07 PM
There really isnt much to this wallpaper. The stock of Light isnt of very good quality, the death note looked like a random shape to me at first, and the lighting of the death note, Light and bg dont match.

Theres also no blending to speak of. All I see is a bg with a gradient with 3 images put on top of it.

My suggestion would be to reduce the opacity of that black noise texture you have on the bg and have Light blend into the gradient. Like hes emerging from the shadows. The death note just kinda floating there is really distracting, I would look for an image of him holding it instead.

nichunter1
12-13-2008, 01:40 AM
Thx maru ^^ ill see what i can do later today =)

edit : heres a second edit