Full Metal Alchemist: Wallpaper

[Yallow]

http://www.animeforum.com/image/thum_18238249177ff4074fb.png (http://www.animeforum.com/vbimghost.php?do=displayimg&imgid=38150)

Very quick wallpaper i put together. Some critsism and feedback would be great. Thanks :)

[SigmaSD]

I think it's really good. Nice job.

[nichunter1]

You used simple effects but looks great :) gj

[Yallow]

Thanks guys. If you guys could tell me wut i could improve, it'd be helpful too xD.

[nichunter1]

Maybe you should owrk on the full metal alchemist text on top left because it seems a bit odd to me but maybe thats just me :P

[Rein*]

Im no expert, actually im far from it but i liked it, i think it look good

[rikumi]

It looks very great indeed, not too contrast and mainly balanced. But, I prefer having the wordings on the right side, because all my desktop icons would be on the left.

[Hautalken]

Well it looks ok to me.

You used a lot of motion blur on the background. It's actully quite excessive. Lose some of it. Make the bg colors a bit lighter too. Also, Edward looks slightly stretched out of proportion; horizontally. Hold down the "SHIFT" button next time you resize.
Then there's the logo. Don't ever use effects on a logo when it's in a postion like that.

That was some healthy criticism for you. Now get out there and work on that wall. Make a better version and post it up here.

[enzzo90]

is a great wallpaper, nice job

[FLASH-X]

damn good,,, i tried to find some mistakes but cant find any ..........great job

[SupaWeena]

The only thing that loks out of place is the FMA text... To me it just doenst fit....But all aournd it looks like a wallpaper i would use.. keep up the good work