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10-18-2008, 09:00 AM
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MY PICTURE (http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9703/picture4pj5.jpg) <-------- CLICK!!

Hi, uhm. I decided to share this picture w/ you guys here. I'd like to hear open
criticism or comments that would help me improve this picture.
I'm open for suggestions, or you can just make fun of the picture.:(

Please bear w/ me, our desktop just got reformatted (thank you MOM) so I don't have a photoshop.
I had fun w/ the evil twin idea so I decided to make one, and I have to give credit to my lil' bro for his toy gun. Oh yeah, I made this w/ paint, hehe ^_^

Thank you for viewing.

10-21-2008, 05:09 AM
Um, exactly what have you done with the picture?

10-21-2008, 05:12 AM
Photography: Go for a dramatic angle, maybe behind one of the guys for some "excitement" factor

Editing : lol, same as Pseu

10-22-2008, 11:16 AM
First of all, the lighting is really flat and dull, which pretty much kills any hope of dramatic effect, veiling flare is even visible on the guy on the left. Choose a better location for this shot and think about the light, too. Oh and try not to chop people's heads/limbs off.

12-03-2008, 04:05 AM
exposure, point of view, and setting issues. All things that improve with practice.