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TwylightStarr
04-30-2008, 06:29 PM
Just another wallpaper. I am trying different things and working on incorporating different fonts.

Deadling
05-01-2008, 12:21 AM
Imo. I'd say the background stands out more than the character does. Maybe giving her a small stroke, or changing the background theme's colors, could make her stand out more. Would probably help making your text stand out with a darker scheme as well.

I love the character, cute anime girls are always my favorite, lol. And I'd love to see the background in like a purple/blue/black scheme with the same design it has now. I think that would look hot, lol.

Dark Wolf 09
05-01-2008, 12:34 AM
Hm..I like the extracted picture, I bet it took you long enough to make the perfect pixels of it's diameter, huh? The coloring is very vibrant. Lol, but it has a nice touch to it, the font is good, but try messing with the coordinates functions give some more charastics. =) Hopefully everything will turn out good!

TwylightStarr
05-01-2008, 08:39 AM
I got a clean render. So I did not have to render this one. When I render it is hard for me...hopefully eventually getting a pen table / don't know if this will help and one day really good software might be a benefit. Thanks for the advice and comments. Now the other one I made yesterday for Final Fantasy. My neighbor loved it...but he is a guy. Me I was like...blinded after putting it on my screen lol.

IchigoKiss
05-01-2008, 10:25 AM
I like the render and the text
but the b/g just doesn't work maybe try it in a dark b/g
with some sparkle and idk textures rather than just the
whole technicolor backgrounds with flashy stars ect.
I seem to notice that it's your style, but it just doesn't work
on this render =/ And also stick to the same colours as
the character.

P.S
what font is that?

TwylightStarr
05-01-2008, 06:56 PM
Man I wish I could remember the font but you can download this whole font bonanza thing online for free I think. I think I actually saved part of this prior so maybe I can work on this one more. I don't really know what to do with it because I just seem to not be getting the knack of this. I guess I will have to figure out what will look best if I can fix it with suggestions.