Moonlight waltz

[IchigoKiss]

Ok so I saw this awesome render and
I decicded to do a wallpaper on it [because I think it looks pretty]
anyways... comment and criticize
any changes is acepted except the wallpaper size ^^;

[TwylightStarr]

It is bright and Starry. It would look very nice as a wallpaper in my opinion. I always like dance themes mixed with stars and it really is a beautiful render you chose.

[UrusaiSevera]

Overall it's too bright.

Also the bright white spot below (what is supposed to be) the main focus, has become a huge blindspot to the rest of the wallpaper.
The "starfield" isn't working... The stars are to monotomous. A starfield should look dynamic and the star shapes should vary a lot.

Also I would advise you to create some sort of effect.. for instance.. stars coming from her outstretched hand.

The first bit of text looks nice.. but the second part doe'sn't really fit.

[FlashD]

Hmm ... here I have to agree with Severa. The overall wallpaper is too bright and the starfield is not random enough. Also the text is somehow not matching the composition. I would suggest changing it. The character is not really blending well with the background either. It's brightness makes it look 3D. Like that you really show off all the extraction mistakes as well, specially on the character's hair, but there are also her wings and some parts of the skirt.

[IchigoKiss]

Thanks you guys ^^
I'll try another one and yeah
post it here