A wallpaper

[demonplight]

I use 22" monitors. rally cant find many good wallpapers, so I have been forced to make a few this is one that I have been forced to make my own. I have been working on this concept for a while now, any ideas?
http://www.animeforum.com/image/thum_1119147baf805b834e.jpg (http://www.animeforum.com/vbimghost.php?do=displayimg&imgid=26202)

[Serated]

It looks a little overall too grainy, and the render is a little too blended in. The colors and text usage are great though.

[demonplight]

I'm not quit sure what I want to do with this its like the 4th one I made with that ninja girl. i think I want to make her and the text look like they where printed on old paper.