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LavaBug
02-06-2008, 11:25 AM
was in bad mood, made this, now happy...
any good ?

Edit : New version up

Kaitou Ace
02-06-2008, 08:55 PM
I like it ^_^ the grain and blown out highlights work really well for ayanami. Looks almost like a lomo camera effect.

fire_fox
02-06-2008, 08:58 PM
i like it

LavaBug
02-07-2008, 04:37 AM
made another version (has more white now)
also I killed a typo in the old version

UrusaiSevera
02-07-2008, 12:25 PM
Last two versions are indeed better, but I can't seem to figure out which one to like more.
The white or the black, here's why:
- The white version brings the viewers focus to the character, but there is quite a bit of negative space right next to the character. This makes the wallpaper look a tad bit empty.
- I think you overused the black grain in the black version too much. Especially next to her right shoulder (left for us), the black is too solid and massive looking there and not in a grain form like the rest.

The rest of the wallpaper looks very nice, I especially like the effects around the window with the text in it.

clowangel
02-07-2008, 05:52 PM
Hmm, I think I prefer the whiter version. I agree there's a lot more negative space, but overall, it feels a lot more cleaner and refreshing even if the mood is dreary. But, in my opinion, you overused the grain just a bit.

Goodylucky
02-09-2008, 10:08 PM
i dont know why but the white one looks nicer to me

darkjester
02-09-2008, 10:23 PM
I like the black one a little better, the effects seem like there are smoother in that one. Kinda like they evolved from the black space.
The white one is awesome too though.

Animousflavista
02-12-2008, 10:44 AM
agree with clowangel.. the grain is a bit distracting for me. but the composition is well done :)

MountainGhost
02-23-2008, 07:39 PM
Good layout. i love the girl and In love the angle of her body.

I would prefer some more pastel and *nice* colors as well as more clarity!