-one winged cerberus-

[darkjester]

Some of my fan arts

Here are two Haji drawings
http://one-winged-cerberus.deviantart.com/art/Haji-71560211

http://one-winged-cerberus.deviantart.com/art/Haji-colored-71560271

Cait Sith
http://one-winged-cerberus.deviantart.com/art/Cait-Sith-70450937

and a Kakashi I drew for my sister
http://one-winged-cerberus.deviantart.com/art/Kakashi-Hatake-71560452


I've just started doing fanart (usually I work on original designs), so critizism and critiques are most helpful.

[nickholeye14]

first off haji rock! great job on the shadding and the faces. on the second one of haji i think that is sholders ( forgot how to spell that) are a tad bit to wide but over all they are great keep it up =)

[Knuffle Bunny]

The Cait Sith one is my favorite, so i'll comment on that one.

Overall, I love it. Love the shading, love the face, love the whiskers especially, but i'm not so fond of the hands. The one gripping the orb thing looks like paper. It doesn't have much form. Notice how the fingers almost follow the side of the orb thing. They need to bulge a little more sy it gives the impression that the fingers are round.

You're art is pretty, good. Continue, you have potential. =3

[╬Karami Mew~Meow]

I luffs the 3rd one!!! Christmas kitty <33333 lol xD
your pretty good, so keep it up! =~.^=

[Aura of the Twilight]

Good job. You did Kashi pretty good. I love how well you colored the hair.

[darkjester]

Thanks everyone


Overall, I love it. Love the shading, love the face, love the whiskers especially, but i'm not so fond of the hands. The one gripping the orb thing looks like paper. It doesn't have much form. Notice how the fingers almost follow the side of the orb thing. They need to bulge a little more sy it gives the impression that the fingers are round.


This makes a lot of sense! I'll have to remember that. I'll probably re-do the fingers/hand when I have more time.


-I have a new drawing done. It's a Bleach one celebrating the Holidays.
http://one-winged-cerberus.deviantart.com/art/Bleach-Holiday-72590739

[cat21333]

very nice i love the art. keep up the good work!

[MissChelly]

Oh neat! I love your Haji- and that Bleach Christmas one also- very cute.
You do really well. The only tip I can give is when you're coloring/shading, to go section by section, instead of trying to color it all at once- I do the same mistake, but I'm not real big on coloring my pics anyway so I'm lazy on improvement there- but for you, if you like coloring/shading- that would be my tip to you to make your art EVEN better than it already is. :) Wonderful work.

[Mistygemmy]

The bleach christmas one is pure love <3 adorable, seriously ==== amazing art ^__^