Foxy's Wallpaper from Naruto

[Bluefox-chan]

Hello all and Welcome to me dazzle thread!
Well i got a new laptop so i got photoshop back on my comp (yayness!)
well i just made a wallie so i decided to share it with all of u lovely sempai's ^_^

Since i told Ookami-chan(Therebel) he could have it here it is
Extract by Thorny(see i remembered! im proud of myself!!!)
Comments and critism are love!!

[Bean Bandit]

You always do such good work.

[The Rebel]

Wow, Foxy. That turned out really well. And are ya sure you don't mind me adding it to my collection of wallies? SOOO purdy! YEEEEE!

[Bluefox-chan]

thx guys ^^
this was one of my favs

Toodles!
Foxy

[Fourstarball]

I like the colours in this.

I'd be tempted to add just a little more detail in the background. Too much would distract from the main focus, but just a little would give the eye something to look at. :D

[joshlp]

the wallpaper is great

[MistressPookyChan]

Please remember that comments should be more than a couple words. If you like the paper, say why. :) It makes the comment much more constructive and less spammy. Thanks!

[Serated]

I think that the background should be a more yellowy color. But thats just me. The text is good too, what font did you use?

[Sakurakun]

Hey really nice wallpaper. It all complements on each of the other elements of the piece of work ^.^

[Light Buster]

Nice. Tamari's so awsome! :laugh: That's a great wallpaper.

[so.ali]

it is nice picture

but

do u know the man who love her ?????:)

[~Sakura Haruno~]

WOW great job u used cool colors and ...i dont kow what to say >.<everythings just perfect

[Bluefox-chan]

wow u guys rock! ^///^

I think that the background should be a more yellowy color. But thats just me. The text is good too, what font did you use? ~Serated
u think? when i started this it was suppose to be a siggy but i got carried away lol. the font is called made in china (i think) i have it saved on another website pm me if u want the link (i didnt make it tho)

WOW great job u used cool colors and ...i dont kow what to say >.<everythings just perfect -~Sakura Haruno~
lol thx i didnt think it was going top turn out so great but thx for thinking so lol

to everyone else thanks for the comments!
they are surprize love!

Toodles!
Foxy

[Key]

Sigh...I really, REALLY hate to disappoint you...but it doesn't look good...SORRY!! >_<

For starters, to make a simple wall, I suggest make the bg in white, or other light colours. Do not filter it (the same goes to the purple bg on this wall).
Do not emboss the rectangular shape. It's too weird to emboss something like that if your wall is a simple wall.
I assume the character extracted from the video, no? Because it's somehow a low quality. Need more cleaning.
The text and the font doesn't really blends well. Somehow, you emboss it. And the words are very confusing to read. Use a different font that fits the wall and try to move the text to the upper right, in which has more space. Leave the word 'Temari' on the rectangular box. And now, people won't get confused for the text and the name.

I hope my critiques're not that harsh. But I do hope this helps you to improve your walling skills. ^_^