SSWARS Wallpaper : Original Art by Maid Mia/Coloring by LPS

[Thornwillow]

A wallpaper I designed for Mia's and LPS' site, SSWars. Enjoy. ^_^

1st - 1152 x 864
2nd - 1024 x 768

EDIT: I meant to say that I got my inspiration for this wallpaper from Kill Bill because when I saw Alexia, that's what I instantly thought when I saw her. So this is the result of that. :)

[Silent Swordsman]

How original. I love the colors, it's like orange-yellow, and also the person with the swords is interesting.

[LadyPSerenity]

Except Alexia ish VERRA evil. xD

The wallpaper is Lovelllly!!! And so is your sig and av -cough- <3 <3

Thorny has a love for the bad guys it seems xD

[MistressPookyChan]

For some reason, the blood seems off to me. If possible, why not make it look more like a single blade cut?

[KuroTan]

i like it.it looks awesome.^^ altho..i must agree with the mistress when she said the blood looks off.i think it looks too rough when compared with the whole wallie.

[Ariantale]

I too think the blood stain is a bit off. However, the character, the design, everything's fitting and in place. Very well done! Compliments to the whole team.

[Thornwillow]

Ok .. you know I love ya'll so much, but when you say the blood stain is off, can you elaborate what you mean by that? Personally, I think it looks fine, but I need to know what you mean by off?

I know Pookychan says that I should change it to a single blade cut, which is a thought that I had and probably will implement sometime, but I NEED to know if it looks off because it's not on top of the black bar and instead, it's over to the side? Or should ... throw me a bone here. :D I love comments and criticism but the gray area is what gets me. ;_;

I still love you all though for your comments. =D Just help me out. lol

[Ariantale]

For one thing, I don't like how the bloodstain interferes with Alexia's shadow. And I agree wit PookyChan on the single blade cut idea. I guess xx;
Good work in any case, Thorny <3s

[elfenstein]

Hmm, I don't think that the bloodstain needs any improvement. It is well chosen in terms of color, size and position.
What is correct, though, is that it interferes with her drop shadow. In my mind, that comes from the shadow itself, not from the bloodstain. On the shadw, I already gave a comment in your other thread with the wp in it. (Making a perspective shadow instead of the drop shadow).

Anyway, keep up the good work and
have fun,
Elfenstein.

[MistressPookyChan]

I think a smoother cut and splatter will be better. This cut looks like it was done with a bread knife.

[MuZ0NaZ]

Trace the character and use hard shading for extra bling. Also make it bigger since it looks kinda underwhelmed to me now.

[Light Buster]

Well, the bigger version is blurrier than the second one or it's proably just me.