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hadoken
12-01-2006, 01:35 AM
Wow. This one has so much wrong with it, I feel ashamed.

I should know; I posted the original translation years ago when I sucked.

Somebody, please replace that dusty old (and inaccurate) translation with the following. I need to make amends for my sordid past.



The loneliness of parting
Remains with me long after
Though we may meet again tomorrow
I do not want to leave you now

The joy I feel when you hold me gently
I want to hold onto it forever

With the midsummer constellations shining on us
We quietly recite the words
I will teach you the secret words
Let's cast a spell together

Walking along the road we always take home
I cannot let go of your hand
I want to stay this way
But time keeps passing by

There is only one dream I see in the night sky
I want to become your star, someday

Looking into your gentle eyes
My tears overflow somehow
And I truly know the meaning of pain
...I love you

With the midsummer constellations shining on us
We pray silently:
May we be together
With true feelings, always

Within our hearts
Light is given life


It should go without saying, but the above translation is more liberal than literal, because rough translations are a no-no in my book.

Princess Minako
12-01-2006, 09:32 AM
fixed thanks! ^^