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darkcrystalofthebluemoon
11-25-2006, 01:56 AM
Meow
This my first wallpaper that I actually bothered to do properly ^.^;

Please comment on it ^.^

Dere fixed up its a thumbnail now ^.^

MistressPookyChan
11-25-2006, 04:25 AM
Please read the rules about direct linking. Thanks

Skyla_G
11-25-2006, 05:43 AM
hmmm it seems just i little bit too bright... i can hardly make out the render. do you want to captivate us with the quote? that is where my attention is directed to. this is good if it's what you intended. i really feel that it need something to say "im juicy, taste me!" lol... i know thats a very weird way to say it... but this wall looks very juicy... theres just nothing in particular that saying "taste me". does that make sense?

Animousflavista
11-27-2006, 07:21 PM
agree with skyla_G. too bright. It would be better if you remove the lines

Foxxer
12-14-2006, 02:55 PM
It's a neat concept. I don't mind the brightness; it makes it feel more above-the-clouds airy.

The fine diagonal lines above the clouds provide some texture to an otherwise empty sky; they're good.

The only thing I really don't like is the "A wish to fly..." vertical text on the left edge. That's a bit much; the wallpaper could do without it.