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~Troublesome Woman~
05-08-2006, 07:20 AM
Pairing: Itachi X Sakura (don't freak, just read please)
Warning: Spoilers if you haven't seen past the Sasuke-retrieval arc.

Perfectly

http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/ItacSaku_04.jpg

He looked down at the newest Akatsuki member, tendrils of her pink
hair peeping out from under her wide hat. Her jade eyes
stared up at him. She was the picture of innocence.

Haruno Sakura.

She thought she could live without him. She thought she could stay in
Konoha, even after he'd gone.

And she did. For a while. She became a great medical ninja, one of the
best that ever lived. Tsunade had hopes that maybe, one day, she would
become the next Hokage. She was respected, and loved. But it made no
difference.

She lived every day in pain. Everywhere she looked, she was reminded
of him. His dark eyes, his cold, stolid frame. And she couldn't bear it.

So she made a decision. She packed a small sackful of her belongings,
and left. And she walked. For weeks.

And then he'd found her.

Walking, strong, her eyes devoid of emotion. Suddenly she stopped, and
turned. And saw him.
Her expression didn't change. She just stood there, still and
beautiful as a flower, eyes filled with pain.
And somehow, looking into those emerald orbs, he knew.
He approached her, and caught her as she fell. And she cried into his
jacket, and somehow, he comforted her. Without words, he held her, and
through her tears, she told him everything.
And when she was done, he helped her up, and brought her back to
the hideout. And without a moments hesitation, she had become one of
them.

Days had turned into weeks, weeks had turned into months. And he knew he loved
her.

One day, they where sitting on a fallen tree, watching the shadows flicker
amongst the forest. He turned to look at her. She was so pure, her
pale skin almost glowing in the shade of the trees. And he reached
out, fingers gently caressing her cheek.
She turned to look at him with those blank, emotion less eyes, and
he wanted so badly to make them shine with emotion, like he had seen
them filled with before.
He leaned toward her, his gaze still locked with hers, her lips
getting closer and closer until she leaned away slightly,
preventing anything that might or would have happened.
He pulled back, hurt, but the look in her eyes told him it wasn't
a no. He knew she needed more time. So instead, he looked away, back
at the shadows, trying to calm his aching heart.

And he did what she needed. He refrained from touching her, but didn't
distance himself from her. He was always there, but always far enough
away.

It was raining. They where sitting, alone, in his room, listening to
the water pounding down onto the roof. Sitting next to him on the bed,
she turned to look at him. Her hand slid into his.
He looked at her, startled, to be met with her steady gaze. Her eyes
where filled with a iron determination that set his heart racing. She
leaned towards him, so close he could feel her warm, sweet breath, and
their lips met gently. His hand moved up to her face, caressing
her cheek as he kissed her. They pulled apart, faces still close, and
he when he looked into her eyes he knew. She loved him.

Uchiha Itachi looked down into the eyes of the woman he loved, as they
walked along the sunlit path, and emotion filled him. He wanted her
to know just how much she meant to him, just how much he needed her
only to survive. But he didn't need to say a word.

They understood each other perfectly.

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Inspired by the picture up the top.
The bit at the start, "She thought she could live without him" is referring to Sasuke, just incase anyone didn't get that (doubtful).
It's 9.30pm here and I've just finished it, so I don't really think it will be that great... but just tell me what you think.

Michi Hatake
05-08-2006, 08:19 AM
Boo, i hated it :badrazz: Cuz Sakura is soooooooooooo lucky!!!!!! >.< XD


Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I looooooooooved it!!!!!!!!!! :awe: :D :awe:




Must. Get. To. Be. Like. You!!!!!!!!!! XD :laugh:


I really could never do anything like that, all mine are never that good. :(

Keyasaffection
05-08-2006, 11:29 AM
sweet.....really cool....keep it up.....

Fei Ling
05-13-2006, 04:35 AM
Ssssswwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt! I love it! What a very rare love team! But anyway I've heared of it once. Love your fanfics!

_CTA_
05-13-2006, 05:23 AM
aww.. thats just so sweet isnt it? well if its in the anime i bet that she got mixed up between itachi n sasuke

Michi Hatake
05-13-2006, 10:12 AM
really sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet story, im doin Kakashi ones next! XD X3



Kakashi :3 ~~~~~ <3 *dream sequence*

Hyku-San
08-19-2006, 04:48 PM
Pairing: Itachi X Sakura (don't freak, just read please)
Warning: Spoilers if you haven't seen past the Sasuke-retrieval arc.

Perfectly

http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/ItacSaku_04.jpg

He looked down at the newest Akatsuki member, tendrils of her pink
hair peeping out from under her wide hat. Her jade eyes
stared up at him. She was the picture of innocence.

Haruno Sakura.

She thought she could live without him. She thought she could stay in
Konoha, even after he'd gone.

And she did. For a while. She became a great medical ninja, one of the
best that ever lived. Tsunade had hopes that maybe, one day, she would
become the next Hokage. She was respected, and loved. But it made no
difference.

She lived every day in pain. Everywhere she looked, she was reminded
of him. His dark eyes, his cold, stolid frame. And she couldn't bear it.

So she made a decision. She packed a small sackful of her belongings,
and left. And she walked. For weeks.

And then he'd found her.

Walking, strong, her eyes devoid of emotion. Suddenly she stopped, and
turned. And saw him.
Her expression didn't change. She just stood there, still and
beautiful as a flower, eyes filled with pain.
And somehow, looking into those emerald orbs, he knew.
He approached her, and caught her as she fell. And she cried into his
jacket, and somehow, he comforted her. Without words, he held her, and
through her tears, she told him everything.
And when she was done, he helped her up, and brought her back to
the hideout. And without a moments hesitation, she had become one of
them.

Days had turned into weeks, weeks had turned into months. And he knew he loved
her.

One day, they where sitting on a fallen tree, watching the shadows flicker
amongst the forest. He turned to look at her. She was so pure, her
pale skin almost glowing in the shade of the trees. And he reached
out, fingers gently caressing her cheek.
She turned to look at him with those blank, emotion less eyes, and
he wanted so badly to make them shine with emotion, like he had seen
them filled with before.
He leaned toward her, his gaze still locked with hers, her lips
getting closer and closer until she leaned away slightly,
preventing anything that might or would have happened.
He pulled back, hurt, but the look in her eyes told him it wasn't
a no. He knew she needed more time. So instead, he looked away, back
at the shadows, trying to calm his aching heart.

And he did what she needed. He refrained from touching her, but didn't
distance himself from her. He was always there, but always far enough
away.

It was raining. They where sitting, alone, in his room, listening to
the water pounding down onto the roof. Sitting next to him on the bed,
she turned to look at him. Her hand slid into his.
He looked at her, startled, to be met with her steady gaze. Her eyes
where filled with a iron determination that set his heart racing. She
leaned towards him, so close he could feel her warm, sweet breath, and
their lips met gently. His hand moved up to her face, caressing
her cheek as he kissed her. They pulled apart, faces still close, and
he when he looked into her eyes he knew. She loved him.

Uchiha Itachi looked down into the eyes of the woman he loved, as they
walked along the sunlit path, and emotion filled him. He wanted her
to know just how much she meant to him, just how much he needed her
only to survive. But he didn't need to say a word.

They understood each other perfectly.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Inspired by the picture up the top.
The bit at the start, "She thought she could live without him" is referring to Sasuke, just incase anyone didn't get that (doubtful).
It's 9.30pm here and I've just finished it, so I don't really think it will be that great... but just tell me what you think.

that was GOOOOOOD. I've been on these froums for roughly two hours. I went to the fanfiction boards and saw your screen name. Without hesitation, I clicked. And from the insant I finshed one of your stories, I knew you were a Naruto fanatic on the exact same level as me. Furthermore, I hope you're a Shika fan, judging by your name. Do me a favor, and perhaps take a look at my own fanfiction. My first one, here, at least. I want to know what you think of it. What anyone thinks of it, any and everyone is welcome.

~Troublesome Woman~
08-20-2006, 02:55 AM
that was GOOOOOOD. I've been on these froums for roughly two hours. I went to the fanfiction boards and saw your screen name. Without hesitation, I clicked. And from the insant I finshed one of your stories, I knew you were a Naruto fanatic on the exact same level as me. Furthermore, I hope you're a Shika fan, judging by your name. Do me a favor, and perhaps take a look at my own fanfiction. My first one, here, at least. I want to know what you think of it. What anyone thinks of it, any and everyone is welcome.

I will do that right away! And thank you! XD

Hyku-San
08-20-2006, 07:24 AM
I will do that right away! And thank you! XD
thanks for taking a look at my fanfic and where'd you get that avatar?