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jigglyness
04-04-2006, 10:24 PM
K, this was made a while back with GIMP. I now use photoshop so yeah, I can see many flaws. critique welcome. :)
Flowering01
04-04-2006, 10:39 PM
Well i like it a lot and i dont see to much wrong with it
Vendetta
04-04-2006, 10:45 PM
WOW! That is friekin awsome! I don't see any flaws either...
dosja
04-04-2006, 11:25 PM
i like it, especially like the butterfly in the background, nice touch.
jigglyness
04-04-2006, 11:44 PM
Well, since everyone seems too nice to critique it, I'll critique myself. haha. well, now I finally realize that I did WAY too much unnecessary brushing for the background. It looks a little crowded and that seems to take some of the attention away from the main stock. :) If anyone can see anymore, please go ahead and let me know.
eddosan
04-05-2006, 12:04 AM
I see what you meen. There's an area to the left that has a lot of black/dark colors in it, therefore contrasting with the white bg. If you want the characters to attract more attention, then you would have to lighten the left a little, I guess. But hey, if you hadn't mentioned that the design took attention away from the main stock, I would not have noticed it myself. The brushes make the bg look so abstract that I could care less if the colors contrasted or not. It looks good, IMO.
Raven
04-05-2006, 08:17 AM
Letsee.. my opinion. To the right of the chara, it's blank space. If you want to keep/mantain the bg, put if behind them and have it stretch to the left. ALso, try and unfade..take out some of the white that's creeping over their heads/feet, you know, so they're more noticed, and not fading into the bg.
But really, I didn't think it was that bad, just the emptyness on the right side.
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