View Full Version : Rock Lee Wall
Slimekitty
03-14-2006, 11:31 PM
i amde this picture when i was still pretty noob at Gimp/Fireworks and i was just wondering... what can i do to improve?
(im remaking it)
P.S.- Im also putting on my Aburame Shino pic i made, just to show.
and if you have any Rock Lee Wallpapers then plz send them to me!
I am an obsessed freak of Rock lee, he is my hero!
_CTA_
03-17-2006, 08:25 AM
nice!! i like them both!!
DarkMoonPrince
03-17-2006, 09:02 AM
Nice.....They are good. ^_^ two thumbs up
it defenetly kiks mine's a++
Foxxer
04-23-2006, 01:05 AM
For the first: I don't like the font; it's too neat and crisp. Try something more visually interesting. (Though the shadow is kind of neat.) And what's with the miniature guy in the lower-right corner, doing the crane kick with the glow around him? Remove him, leave the larger "thumbs-up" guy, and I think you'd have a stronger wallpaper.
For the second: The colored "pipe" lines are too regular, and the composition isn't very interesting. Maybe move all three images further to one side of the wallpaper, and do something more analog-ish with the lines. The blurred text under the name is good.
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