Untitled Wallpaper

[BlackDragon15]

This is my first wallpaper on here so be nice. Anyways I used PhotoShop 5 LE on it so I don't have much to work with. If there is anything I need to fix, please tell me. And please try to remember I might not have some of the stuff you might have or I might not really now where something is cause I'm not sure if I've found everything. Yeah I know I'm sad^^'

[Alien Sinn]

Too much pruple. It needs some different color variety.
And the brick wall has absolutely NO depth.

[Foxxer]

It looks like she's sitting beside a larger purple version of herself. I think you need to blur the image of her in the background quite a bit more, so that it doesn't draw as much attention.

It looks like the main character has a slight specular glow to her, and that's kind of nice. Her popsicle is a terrific focus for the image. Perhaps increase the saturation on her a little bit to bring her colors out better? And make sure the background is light enough that her hair and arm don't get lost against it - I just noticed that she has wings, and those definitely *do* get lost against the background; you'll maybe need to make the background a little brighter to compensate.

And, the 2-D brick wall has to go. Can you find some other anime wall to put her on top of?

[BlackDragon15]

I don't know if this is any better but I did fix the wall to look more 3-D.

[Foxxer]

Nope. The wall still looks terribly out of place, the figure behind her still looks like a giant looming over her shoulder. My previous suggestions still stand. This can be a good wallpaper, with some more effort.

[Chubakii]

ummm... i don't know if this thing belongs here but so what. just wanna show you the masterpiece of my friend

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/476/lol8ip.th.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lol8ip.jpg)

[Xian Pu]

No, it doesn't belong here. Get out.


The wall itself... crappy image man, crappy image. Either recolor it yourself or find a better quality image. The BG is... interesting, but the wall looks generic, like you made it from a filter or something. Add touches to make it your own. Work on the purple swirl, it looks confusing to me.

[animeglobe]

O_o you people are strict...its okay i guess but all you need is a lil work and it'll be fine.

[CrazedInuyashafan12]

Awesome wallpaper! Goodjob!

[Chubakii]

umm.. the thing i posted here isn't actually a wallpaper. i didn't download it or anything. the person who MADE that DREW that! i just posted it here knowing that there aren't boorish people here.

[MistressPookyChan]

Chubakji, read the forums rules. Especially the part about hijacking another person's thread.

[The Wing Man]

It is ok, i am gonna be honest and say it isn't very good.

[Sephy]

It all looks good except for the wall. That's the only thing I really don't like.

[jigglyness]

Yeah, the wall needs to go. doesn't match the wallpaper at all. And instead of changing the color of the background, just pick a different shade of purple, like a more light or pale looking purple. try to brighten only the stock too.

[aox_ice_mage]

i say u shuld fade the larger person more to make it look more w/e i cnt think of the word mayb a l;ighter purple change the wall into mayb i dunno a violrt bed or some1 help me out here >*<

[pab]

man dont listen to them.
do wat u think is right and always try new things and ull end up wit sumting amazing
or at least it works for me.http://animeforum.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

[jigglyness]

well, the point of posting up the wallpapers is to get opinion on how to improve, so telling them to not listening would totally defeat the purpose of posting the wallpaper. Besides we never said you HAD to do what we say.

[BlackDragon15]

What I want to know is why are you people still posting? Have you not notice I've gave up:mad: I was proud of that wallpaper when I made it and you guys ruined it:<_<: I get it, it was a very bad wall so would you stop telling me that over and over. You might think I'm over reacting, I don't care. I don't have the programs that most of you have. And when I made that I was just learning. I knew not every one would like it but I didn't think you all would hate it. If you had read my first post, you would know that I don't have the best program. I don't have a lot of tools to work with so I can't make these beautiful and outrageous walls. I'll think twice before I post another wall on here cause you guys are way too strict. If you guys still have something to say, say it but I won't reply. Cause I don't care what you have to say anymore.


Ok I'm done.:rant:

[Foxxer]

As I said: this can be a good wallpaper, with a little more effort. And I do like some elements of what you've done, such as the soft highlight to the character.

Don't give up. Play around with the image, see what else you can do with it. Have fun with it. :)

[pab]

well, the point of posting up the wallpapers is to get opinion on how to improve, so telling them to not listening would totally defeat the purpose of posting the wallpaper. Besides we never said you HAD to do what we say.good point http://animeforum.com/images/smilies/dry.gif

[jigglyness]

What I want to know is why are you people still posting? Have you not notice I've gave up:mad: I was proud of that wallpaper when I made it and you guys ruined it:<_<: I get it, it was a very bad wall so would you stop telling me that over and over. You might think I'm over reacting, I don't care. I don't have the programs that most of you have. And when I made that I was just learning. I knew not every one would like it but I didn't think you all would hate it. If you had read my first post, you would know that I don't have the best program. I don't have a lot of tools to work with so I can't make these beautiful and outrageous walls. I'll think twice before I post another wall on here cause you guys are way too strict. If you guys still have something to say, say it but I won't reply. Cause I don't care what you have to say anymore.


Ok I'm done.:rant:
whe are only giving tips man. chilllax http://animeforum.com/images/smilies/dry.gif

[MistressPookyChan]

If you think we are strict now, you should have seen the forum a couple years ago.