GSD WP: Love Knows no Bounds

[La3m]

Hello again, my fellow AF!

Posting my first WP in this section feat. Shinn Asuka and Stella Loussier from Gundam SEED Destiny series. My WP making skills are bit rusty as it's been a year I didn't made one, so any comments are welcome.

'nough said...

[LavaBug]

well the picture of those 2 you have in the bg looks "resized" (try finding a bigger one)
and for my taste, there´s some text missing
but besides of that, it´s ok

[Foxxer]

That's a terrific image to start from; I like the detail in it. And your background works well - interesting without being too busy. The touch of green makes it seem like they're in a forest.

My only suggestion is that the larger image of the couple in the background stands out too much, draws too much attention to itself. Fade it a little bit more into the background, so as to emphasize the couple in the foreground.

[Qeeun]

Very nice, i like the GSD concept.

[Sophonax]

Whoa! No offence, but I really don't like the colour of that background. Too strong. >_<; Tune it down just a little bit (As in darkness), and it'll probably be better. Oh, and you might want to find a larger scan of the characters. ^^;
The characters in the front looks tad plain. Do something about it. D: Like.. They should fit the background. I don't think it does.

Other than that, it's a good idea, and there's a chance it'll turn out quite well, seeing that you're the waller.

[La3m]

*joins in the frenzy...

Thanx for the comments. Did some improvement and need some feedback.

Any comments?

[Sophonax]

I'm not going to repeat it but.. -Points to LavaBugs comment.-

If you could tune down the darkness sligthly more, and it won't be blinding me in my dark room anymore. ^^;

Though, I can't see any changes with the characters in the front.

The font: It looks like you used the Stroke in PhotoShop. Change it to an Outer Glow. =3 I think it'll look more awesome that way.
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[Foxxer]

The background image of the couple still stands out too much, looks like a pair of blue/green giants. It needs to be softened and muted so as not to draw attention away from the image's primary focus: the couple.

And the text looks too ... regular? Plain. Boring. It looks like a PC font trying to masquerade as handwriting, which it is, but it shouldn't. Experiment with it, try finding something more interesting to do with the text.

What if you ended the text with a period instead of an ellipse? "Love knows no bounds." Too much text these days ends with ellipses...

[The Rebel]

Comment, COMMENT, here's your comment! I like it, very shway if you ask me. Great contrast and balance in color.