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Xian Pu
01-21-2006, 11:18 AM
Just finished this wall, and it feels like it's missing something. What that is, I don't know. Anyone got any ideas?

The Rebel
01-21-2006, 04:28 PM
WOW! Looks great, but you're right. It does seem to be missing something. Something has to be done about all that empty space to the right. And it might just be me, but does it seem there is an awful lot of red. Hard to notice her lower torso from the background. That's the best I can think of for my opinion, hope it helps at least some.

Reika Yagami
01-22-2006, 10:59 PM
Thats very impressive! But there is also missing, I think the text is almost blury because of the red color. Try something the text color of white or black that would be even neat. ^^

Opinionated
01-22-2006, 11:01 PM
Agreed, fill in the space and change the color of the text. Other than that good.

Capernicus
01-23-2006, 01:42 AM
I also think it needs some kind ot text. Something catchy, like........I can't think of anything cool! *cries* Wow, I never appreciated how hard this is till now. *sniffles*

Cantelope
01-24-2006, 06:33 PM
I can barely see the text. And to add to that, the font is pretty bad IMO. But other than that...i can't really spot what's wrong. The whole wallpaper feels pretty flat to me, which may be in part to the fact how much empty space there is...There's just her and then...nothing. Just lot's of empty space, with faint patterns and grids. I can only suggest you turn up the contrast a bit, and find a new font. Perhaps make it bigger too.

Good concept, really. However, something else is beefing me with the stock.....I can't put my finger on it though...

Astalle
01-24-2006, 06:37 PM
Hmmm, well, like everyone else said, the letters and torso are hard to see, maybe highlight the letters in black? As for the missing part, maybe something misc. like a rose? Just some ideas ^.^;

animeglobe
01-24-2006, 06:41 PM
putting some kind of neat text will bring it out more..and make the picture intresting