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Xian Pu
10-16-2005, 09:31 PM
My latest wallpaper. Tony Taka this time. Thoughts on it? I tried a little something different with the scan as I ran some filters through several copies of it. I ran some similar filters through the BG to sorta keep them aligned.

Lucidian Dyne
10-18-2005, 01:44 AM
Wow. This wallpaper is going on my desktop, right now.

Excellent job, Xian. ^_^

Raven
10-18-2005, 07:43 AM
Aah! Blurry! Very interesting texture, the bg is great, but i'm not so sure about the girl. If you were trying to blend her in with the bg, maybe try and not texture her so much, and just do a filter over the whole image.
Other than that, its pretty good.

The Rebel
10-18-2005, 03:22 PM
DUDE! It's about time, I've been waiting for another one of your works. BTW can you PM me and let me know if my comments are of any help?
Now for the wallpaper. It looks great. She looks alittle out of focus though. The background should look blurry, but she looks alittle too blurry. And it could use something off to the left in the open space. Something like a poem, yah a poem. If you need help with a poem, let me know. Otherwise, it looks great. She looks well placed compared to the background.

Xian Pu
10-18-2005, 07:45 PM
Revamped it, and hope it came out okay.

Raven
10-19-2005, 07:26 AM
Much better, even though I kind of liked the texture of the bg in the first one, but she does look a lot better in the second one. I don't think it needs a poem, looks good without one.

kingkostas
10-19-2005, 09:23 AM
Wow, very nice work. Excellent!!!;)

The Rebel
10-20-2005, 02:15 PM
Revamped it, and hope it came out okay.Very shway dude. That looks great. Now all it needs is something to fill in the space on the left, text would be the best. Here's a quick poem you could probably use.

Title: Best of You

The passion in the summer heat,
The cool, calm waters of the lake,
The fragrant smell of pine,
And my longing for you,
Reminds me of the best of you.

yotsuba-chan
10-23-2005, 07:27 PM
the hat looks very 2-D, and she herself looks a little blurry.