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Cervan
10-16-2005, 04:18 AM
just made this not too long ago i like it what do you think?

teed
10-16-2005, 04:26 AM
i love it^^

MistressPookyChan
10-16-2005, 07:50 AM
Good concept, but there are a few things that need to be touched up.
1) The edges are a bit jagged and pixilated. I would give it a bit of a outer glow in black to help smooth them a bit.

2) the text/ title in the upper left is too faded and pixilated to read. I would either try to retype it or get rid of it all together.

Try fixing those up and go from there. Like I said, it is a great concept and has good movement, but just needs a bit of cleaning up.

escaflownemoon
10-16-2005, 10:58 AM
I agree with Pooky there, and also if you can fix that line in the middle of the wallpaper..that just sticks out, which if you move it over until it just cover up by the character will look much more consistent with the blend. Good concept though. :)

Cervan
10-16-2005, 02:53 PM
heres what i have now i fixxed that jaggedness on lavi and got rid of that line then i fixxed the words in the upper left had corner

Xian Pu
10-16-2005, 10:40 PM
Use the upload feature man, it's there for a reason you know. Anyway, my complaints are as follows, the blur in the BG is a bit annoying IMO. It's a good idea, but a bit annoying. The extraction needs a loot of work. I don't know where you got the logo in the upper corner, but you need to find a better copy of it. This particular Range Murata image is not that hard to find if you know where to look. I don't, but am saying.

A suggestion? Since she is pushing off of something, why not make it like a screen or something? Then, the blurriness would make more sense. *shrug* An idea.


Actually, disregard everything I said; except for the upload attachment feature. It looks a lot better the second go round. ^_^

Cervan
10-17-2005, 01:22 AM
lol thankyou im sorry about the upload feature ill fix that now

EDIT: fixed

Cervan
10-17-2005, 01:26 AM
Use the upload feature man, it's there for a reason you know. Anyway, my complaints are as follows, the blur in the BG is a bit annoying IMO. It's a good idea, but a bit annoying. The extraction needs a loot of work. I don't know where you got the logo in the upper corner, but you need to find a better copy of it. This particular Range Murata image is not that hard to find if you know where to look. I don't, but am saying.

A suggestion? Since she is pushing off of something, why not make it like a screen or something? Then, the blurriness would make more sense. *shrug* An idea.


Actually, disregard everything I said; except for the upload attachment feature. It looks a lot better the second go round. ^_^ double post diffrent post meanings thankyou man i worked kinda diffrently on this i woke up at night and started painting in photoshop for some reason and this is what i got lol i was half asleep for the first time i remeber reading something about extraction techniques and i did it im rusty i used to use the magic eraser and take out all the black and stuff then use the eraser and 1 PX brush to get it smooth ver painfull and looks bad next version is much better ^^ i used the extraction techique on the logo looks much better now

MistressPookyChan
10-17-2005, 02:13 AM
your second wallpaper was taken off because off-site linking is not allowed. review the rules.

Cervan
10-17-2005, 09:27 PM
QUESTION: when i made this wallpaper my second time is it good enough to be put into the show? i mean err..... i would like this to be put up on the main for others to see how will that go?

Raven
10-18-2005, 08:37 AM
I'm not sure if blurring her is the way to go. The edges needed help (they still look a bit ragged), but it's really not a good idea to blur the main image so much. Maybe try a light gaussian blur, or just smooth the edges and jagged lines.

MistressPookyChan
10-18-2005, 09:58 AM
So... it doesnt seem you know how to add a thumbnail. Go to "Go Advanced" under the reply box. Then "manage attachments". Upload the image through that. Viola! Thumbnail.

Uchiha Ulquiorra
10-18-2005, 04:09 PM
It's good but I don't like the blurryness of the background. I still like it though. ^_^

Cervan
10-18-2005, 07:03 PM
well looks like im going to do alot more work on this now i wont post one up until i fix it ok?? thanks pookie poo for telling me how to do the image thing....