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akachan
09-12-2005, 08:01 AM
another fanart of mine, as usual... I think you'll get crazy soon :)
This one came out for the banner of my website wall's section
ok, what to add/change? too bright?(even if I can't make gray sunrays ^^ :p ) oh, the paper roughness thing it's on purpose :)

Raven
09-12-2005, 10:11 AM
The brightness levels are fine (it's supposed to be sunny and bright, right?) It's wonderful, the only thing I can think of is maybe lightening up the text, its a little dark, unless that was your intention or lightening makes it fade into the bg too much. It's great!

Xian Pu
09-12-2005, 11:12 AM
Well, hello new wallpaper... I agree though, the brightness level is just fine as is. About the ONLY thing I can think of is to change the font, or to change the color. Even then I'm not so sure that would do anything. It's one of those if you change it it MAY look better, but if you leave it alone, it will probably look good too... Meh.

Essex
09-12-2005, 12:01 PM
So nice, as always. The only thing I can think of is, As Xian said, the font colour

<3

souske
09-12-2005, 12:17 PM
Wow thats a pretty good picture and now all you have to do is ink it in.

Zingo
09-12-2005, 03:51 PM
Very nice. Like the wallpaper and fanart. Brightness is fine. Only think I don't like is the font.

Also your fanart reminds me of Ranma... ^^

akachan
09-13-2005, 06:19 AM
Also your fanart reminds me of Ranma... ^^..So this time I've managed to draw Akane well ;)

Thank you everybody! ^^
mhhh, I'll try to make the text paler, using the same colors of the sunrays on the wood wall...
About the font, I'll try "dear joe", even if I use always that font...I think it rocks ;) (now it's Popsies, to me it's a fifties/french one ^^)
One last thing: should I increase a bit the saturation of all the wallpaper? The more I see it, the more it seems to me a bit too gray... -_-''

Kyrie
09-13-2005, 09:02 AM
I think it seems a bit too gray .. the green leaves on the side make your character look too faded and washed out. But I love the 'soft' feeling you have put into this background!

Xian Pu
09-13-2005, 12:10 PM
Hrm.. Yar, you might want to bring out the colors juuuuust a smidge. Help sharpen it up.

akachan
09-14-2005, 07:51 AM
2.0,

less washed out, changed text and contrasted...
Better? o__o
hopes^^

Xian Pu
09-14-2005, 01:24 PM
Much better.

yotsuba-chan
09-14-2005, 04:44 PM
its cute. it looks kind of like akane from ranma 1/2.

Xian Pu
09-14-2005, 07:25 PM
its cute. it looks kind of like akane from ranma 1/2.


That's kinda the point. ;)