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Daenerys
07-19-2005, 10:28 PM
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Ami~chan
07-19-2005, 10:33 PM
Excellent; I personally am fasinated by tales and stories of Jack the Ripper, so reading a short story on the subject was enjoyable. Keep up the excellant work; the last paragraph was my favorite, however.

Daenerys
07-19-2005, 11:46 PM
I think the ending was rushed myself.. but thank you!

I might re-write it when I have more time. I'm actually on my mom's computer, so my creativity was stifiled. There's so much more I wanted to portray.

pyrothunder336
07-20-2005, 12:00 AM
i was a great story plot and Jack the Ripper was a good charcter with a good classic sounding name

Daenerys
07-20-2005, 12:57 AM
Oh.. but was that Jack the Ripper, or just some guy?

helba
07-20-2005, 02:53 AM
good story

Ami~chan
07-20-2005, 08:30 PM
Hrmm... I thought that the guy was Jack the Ripper, in the end. Maybe he wasn't; the ending was sorta a cliffhanger, but it's good.

Marie2007
07-20-2005, 10:12 PM
it is a very good short story the plot is good as well

Daenerys
07-23-2006, 10:59 PM
I forgot I wrote this. Aint half bad either. --hoping for more comments--