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Xian Pu
07-08-2005, 11:10 PM
Okay I really don't want to alter the BG so...

My question is moreso about the girls- what can I do to improve them? I've ran some filters through them but am not sure about them entirely. Any suggestions as to how to improve them would be greatly appreciated.

MistressPookyChan
07-08-2005, 11:37 PM
Does the text say Gummer Dans? The characters look fine, the background looks fine, but I'm not digging the text. also, I like thw swirls in the background. How about making them less transparent?

Xian Pu
07-09-2005, 12:00 AM
Oh snap! I forgot to mention that I took the BG pic. It's a shot from in front of my apartment.

How's this? Better?

____
07-09-2005, 02:55 PM
Yeah, it's better. *Looks at what they are eating.* OMG! I love those things! Those are so good! :3

For some reason, I think the chars. hair are too "smooth". The outline of them are kind of jagged around the hair. Other than that.... niiiice. ^^

Kukuriyu
07-09-2005, 10:14 PM
Well i'm just a beginner but the Lineart needs to be sharper and...

Dyne
07-09-2005, 10:20 PM
I like it. What they are eating looks a little sugestive though, lol

Kukuriyu
07-09-2005, 10:40 PM
and Yeah... Those thing they're eating... Forget it. IT COOL!

akachan
07-11-2005, 04:06 AM
some rays from the top right and diffuse glow? put some overlay contrast on the bg, to saturate the tone..make it also a bit lighter, or darken the girls ^_^
btw very good! I like also the font and brushes...why don't you make it overglow overlay?

EternalBlue
07-11-2005, 07:33 PM
I think the extraction's a little choppy, could be just me, but maybe blur the edges a bit. They seem to stand out a lot from the background. I agree with akachan, some sunrays would definitely help ^^

Xian Pu
07-11-2005, 10:59 PM
I would love to do some sun rays but for two things. One, look at the position of the shadows, how can I add rays without throwing the whole... whatistis off? Any idea how? I forgot the second thing... I'm old.

cowboydemon666
07-12-2005, 12:38 AM
Yeah, it's better. *Looks at what they are eating.* OMG! I love those things! Those are so good! :3

For some reason, I think the chars. hair are too "smooth". The outline of them are kind of jagged around the hair. Other than that.... niiiice. ^^what are they eating? i cant tell what it is...

Raven
07-12-2005, 12:34 PM
Looks great, maybe try and smooth out the jagged lines on the top of their heads, other than that, it's good.

EternalBlue
07-12-2005, 03:10 PM
Yea the shadows are a bit weird, but to me I think the sun is coming from about...say 15-30 degrees West of North? Somewhere around there.