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Sadako Sumeragi
06-16-2005, 03:31 PM
I've been working on this one for a while, but right now I'm stuck. I can't figure out what I should add to fill up the negative space.

Essex
06-16-2005, 08:44 PM
Wow, I like this alot! Good job

One thing I think you should try:
Move the text more in to the black... and make some variation in the blue part of the font

EternalBlue
06-16-2005, 10:06 PM
Actually, I think it's great as it is. Simple and easy to look at ^_^

MuZ0NaZ
06-19-2005, 08:07 AM
I too think it is as as it is now, but you should get rid of some artifacts in the bg(window/moon) - jaggies and stuff.

MistressPookyChan
06-19-2005, 08:57 AM
Very nice! Here are my suggestions:
1) move the text more down and left. In the black, as Doi said.
2) more glow! Make the text flow slightly, add some glow from the moon... give it a very heavenly feel.

Ami~chan
06-19-2005, 09:13 PM
I agree with Doi and Pooky-chan. Move the text more to the black; it'd make the text easier to read.

It looks absolutely marvelous though.

____
06-19-2005, 10:32 PM
*Agrees with everyone* Add a nice glow to the moon. Sunburst would do it good...or whatever that is called.

However, it does look great.

akachan
06-20-2005, 07:59 AM
agrees with every one, plus:
I think she would be nicer with blue or pink hair(), walls with theme colors are the best, imho..maybe cause I don't like green hair, except for lum :D

The Rebel
06-20-2005, 04:23 PM
I like it the way it is. But that's just me, I don't even know what a wallpaper is for.

kuro_chan
06-24-2005, 10:55 AM
A wallpaer is for your desktop.. --;http://animeforum.com/images/smilies/dry.gif

miroku-inuyasha
06-24-2005, 11:03 AM
I like it, it's really good

Sadako Sumeragi
06-24-2005, 02:14 PM
I made a few changes in the hair color and moon.

Dyne
06-24-2005, 02:47 PM
Its really good! The outer portion of it is a little dark, IMO, but still good

akachan
06-29-2005, 03:55 AM
muuuuch better XD! I like it!