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EternalBlue
12-02-2004, 07:54 PM
Hehe it's been a while since I've had the time to work on a wall. This one's pretty basic, I think I'll have to work on the trees in the background a bit still.(Change em into different trees mainly :P and add some texture to them) Aside from that, anything else?

acamori
12-02-2004, 08:03 PM
heya blue boi. nice wall, but i'm not sure about the trees, the bark on the front one seems furry which most arent, and the ones in the back seem flat without some sort of texture (the trunks anyways) the leaves are alright, and the grass is great. other than that, my only thought is that the wall seems too empty, maybe make the chara bigger or something to add more to the foreground

gadgetgirl16
12-02-2004, 08:54 PM
i agree with acamori, for the trees....hmmmm so ur serching for ideas....i think u should add butterflys, birds and leaves......idk its just an idea.... :D

EternalBlue
12-03-2004, 12:44 AM
Hmm how's this?

Fixed the "furriness".
Added some texture to the background trunks.
Butterflies (obviously XD) not sure if they fit though.
Text, also not sure if it fits.

Alyssa
12-03-2004, 03:04 AM
Wow - I like your ideas by far. I dunno though, was wondering, is the grass supposed to appear that blurry? Otherwise, I don't see much of any problems at all. You did great - even your first wallie looked wonderful, but this one has much more depth. Wicked wallie nonetheless! ^^

GangstaSnail
12-03-2004, 07:08 AM
Nice, the bg looks better now ^_^ just the butterflies are out of place (at least as the look now). For butterflies, maybe go with a softer color (like light yellow, red, green), try with color dynamics (in PS) or maybe keep the default setings. Oh, and maybe make them a bit smaller ^_^

acamori
12-03-2004, 07:33 AM
like wizzy said, the butterflies look a bit out of place right now. a different color would make them fit better, instead of neon pink/redish whatever it is. and the trees look much better now.

MuZ0NaZ
12-03-2004, 02:33 PM
you should work on the tree texture more and do smth about those butterflies - they just dont fit right now. some lil sparkles around them may look great. i love the lush, soft grass & the colors though >_>

Himura Enishi
12-03-2004, 02:33 PM
agree with wiz and acamori, but other than that great job, extraction is flawless

Sadako Sumeragi
12-03-2004, 04:45 PM
It looks great; the only thing that bothers me is the glow on the girl. It doesn't fit.

EternalBlue
12-03-2004, 06:11 PM
Ok let's try this

acamori
12-03-2004, 07:11 PM
better, and glow's not too bad on the character. it might fit better if it were more yellowish then blue though, but i wouldn't worry about it too much. (the trees are nice)

gadgetgirl16
12-03-2004, 11:26 PM
i agree with, acamori and ive noticed u can see through some butterflys....anyways good job!

EternalBlue
12-03-2004, 11:57 PM
I know, I made a couple transparents lol