Negima Rumble

[Xian Pu]

This here is a crossover scan featuring Asuna (kawaii and dangerous) from Negima; and Tenma (spastic and a fuggin ditz) from School Rumble.


Thoughts?

[shi_amai]

It looks really good. Good background, nice extraction, and cute picture, but I don't know that the text really fits.

[Essex]

It looks really good. Good background, nice extraction, and cute picture, but I don't know that the text really fits.

I think the same...

[Zingo]

Me 3. Go for a cleaner font ^_-

[Xian Pu]

Cleaner font eh? Okay. How's this?

[Schneedrache]

You know how you look at a wallpaper and you can think to yourself "this is an outstanding looking wallpaper" or "hmm, has the key elements just seems to be missing the thread to tie it together..." this one is missing the thread, i can't put my finger on what it is missing, but when i look at it overall, seems to be missing a layer...something to tie the images to the background....

i prolly sound stupid, or retarded but just my observation

[Zingo]

Maybe change the color on the font. But it's better know.

[Essex]

Try using orange(same as the girls hair) as the fonts main colour... just see how it looks

[Xian Pu]

Orange it is. How's this?

[Essex]

Looks better now :]

[escaflownemoon]

I don't know about orange..I like the previous text colour better because since the girl's colour is orange, she is standing out but now with the orange text it really makes her the really dominate one..in before almost equal..maybe its just me..^^

[EternalBlue]

I dunno, still feels like something's missing, just can't put my finger on it....hmm.. *spaces out thinking*