View Full Version : Rei Ayanamui Blue Techno
Kamui Shirou
11-23-2004, 04:07 AM
This wallpaper is one of my old designs
MistressPookyChan
11-23-2004, 04:09 AM
Interesting, but there is some flow issues going on. it seems that there are three separate things in the wallpaper: the background, the text, the character. None of them are going together at all. The background should go with the character so that they look like one image. The text should fit the mood of the wallpaper as a whole instead of being just a cut-and-paste text box.
Kamui Shirou
11-23-2004, 04:16 AM
Yeah this wall was about a year ago XD I still like the BG tho *hugs* XD
what MPC said, also, the char. looks blurry and there are jagged adges. not bad for last year.
Essex
11-23-2004, 08:04 AM
The bg is way to tech for the char, but I liked the bg... change the char and the font, and maybe set the font on one of the edges...
akachan
11-23-2004, 08:16 AM
yeah, as pooky said it needs more work, do you still have the file (.psd, .psp...) to change the wall?you said u make this one a year ago...post here something more recent ^_^, so we can help you, even if you're a good waller ;)
Kamui Shirou
11-23-2004, 03:31 PM
yeah, as pooky said it needs more work, do you still have the file (.psd, .psp...) to change the wall?you said u make this one a year ago...post here something more recent ^_^, so we can help you, even if you're a good waller ;)
the Chii wallpaper I posted is one of my most recent works. Altho I never save my stuff in PDF form donno why I don't but Maybe I should start lol
MistressPookyChan
11-24-2004, 05:06 AM
pdf?! noooo, psp or psd, depending on what image program you use. It allows you to keep all the layers so you can go back and edit them later.
shi_amai
11-24-2004, 07:57 AM
You need to do something to make Rei blend in well and fit with the background. And yeah, as for the font, it definetly doesn't fit. Sometimes wallpapers don't need fonts people. Sometimes it's better left without fonts.
Btw, MPC, when do I get the banner for the Halloween Contest. ^_^
Kamui Shirou
11-25-2004, 01:38 AM
Thanks for the pointers peeps I will try to make this design again and see what I can come up with ^_^
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