...and pink *Ecchi*

[Essex]

Hah! Remembered the warning now, though is it a bad sign my wps always need a warning? -_-

Well, here it is... What does it need?

*Transparent swimsuit*

[____]

Oo; thanks for the warning.........and it is a bad sign.......

perhaps you could tone down the highlight.

that's all i can see for the moment, although the image was a bit startling. Oo

[Zingo]

Maybe make somethinge else then that grass.. Maybe more colors?

Still nice though. Nitty night

[Essex]

Maybe make somethinge else then that grass.. Maybe more colors?

Still nice though. Nitty night

Black and white... and pink. No other colours wanted, at least for my part Xp

Well, the grass and leaf wasn't that suiting, so... a bunch of lips insted

[gadgetgirl16]

wow that looks better.....anyways nice wallpaper...thankz for the warning....

edit: hateing slow bandwith and internet explorer 6.0

[_hades the wicked]

:: edit ::
The image and the background don't fit together.

FOR THE FIRST VERSION
My suggestions:
1. Either change the subject pic, or change the bg to something livelier;
2. If you're to keep the bg, remove the grass, for it has nothing to do with a girl in a bathing suit, really;
3. If you're to keep the text, instead of using a gradient, just use solid colors there. I'd suggest something like "black and white", get it?
4. Blur and lower the opacity of the background image.

FOR BOTH
The black theme doesn't fit her.
Try white, or pink, since those are the colors you're willing to work with.

I think that's it.

[____]

the lips do make it look better.

****begin idea****
add a reverse shadow to her (a white one or a grey one perhaps. -shrugs-)
****end idea****

[Xian Pu]

Lose the enlarged image entirely. It doesn't match. I like the lips better than the leaves they match better. Like already suggested, why not make the grass pink and black and white? Ooooor you could lose the shagginess of it somewhat and make it look like some type of carpet? *shrug*

[Essex]

Maybe this? I think it looked better with the gradient background... well well ;)

[animeglobe]

well it looks a little better

[_hades the wicked]

It does look better, but instead of using a pink to white to black gradient, just make a subtle pink to white, it will look much better.
Remove the background image, it will look better... Or make it a pink hue and add a lot of transparency to it, and blur.

[Essex]

Two more sugestions... something happened at the bottom, don't know what -_- anyway, the toolbar hides it

[Suzuna]

I like it Tatsu. I also like your Baldur Force EXE sig 'n avvy. I think I have more pics from that..

Anyway on the wallpaper, the last version kicks. And I don't think it's a bad sign that your wallpapers always need a warning. The best artists do hentai, and that's just how it is.

...with the noteable exception of CLAMP.

[Master_Will]

her boobs are FREKIN HUGE!!!

to big to be exact!

[animeglobe]

well you did do a little better but still need help

[_hades the wicked]

@Master Will:
This is not the place to say if wheter "her boobs are frekin huge" or not, please keep this to wallpaper discussing only. If you don't have something to add about what to change or which versions you like better and why, don't post, please. Thanks.

@Tatsu:
The version with the background image seems more appealing to me. Just blur the background image a bit, maybe a 1 or 2 px Gaussian Blur should do it.

[Essex]

Like this?

[_hades the wicked]

Yes yes, exactly. Now all that you're needing is to get rid of the bar on the bottom ne ^^;;

[Essex]

Ah... yes, of course... forgot -_-
Så der:

[_hades the wicked]

It's good now I think. =)

[Essex]

Thanks... let me know if there something more :]

[MistressPookyChan]

Looks good! The changes you made make it look a lot better.