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Xian Pu
11-16-2004, 11:37 PM
Oy! I've never taken so long with an image. :<_<: I clocked myself at around thirteen some odd hours on this image alone. What took me so long? I retraced it from scratch-- that's what. Anyway, is it any good?

____
11-17-2004, 01:03 AM
looks really good. the bg fits well IMO.

she seems a bit grainy where there are shadows (just a bit....)
and she needs to be cleaned up a bit. try moving the text over a bit to the left.
the shadows are nicely done.

that's it for now.

good job. ^^

Foxxer
11-17-2004, 03:00 AM
I like it! Great color consistency, nice that the image is so large.

escaflownemoon
11-17-2004, 09:25 AM
Grainy..that's all I can think of.

Essex
11-17-2004, 10:06 AM
The eyes were pretty grainy... except that, it looks good

Xian Pu
11-17-2004, 11:21 AM
Grainy eyes? O.o I don't see it. As for the crapiness of the image itself. I don't get it. I save it in Photoshop, it gets grainy, but the image, when saved looks fine. I saved this one in Paintshop-- let's see if it turned out better or not. Son of a... anyone know of a way to stop that from happening? Stop the mushiness of the colors as it were?

Han
11-17-2004, 11:41 AM
It looks like she's hovering just above the surface.. and the text should be more visible..
Other than that... I think it looks good - simple and clean..<3

escaflownemoon
11-17-2004, 09:23 PM
well since I am using a laptop, if I lean a bit further I can see that its still grainy but its a pass, because nobody would stare at the screen about 5 inches away.