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Xian Pu
11-16-2004, 11:37 PM
Oy! I've never taken so long with an image. :<_<: I clocked myself at around thirteen some odd hours on this image alone. What took me so long? I retraced it from scratch-- that's what. Anyway, is it any good?
looks really good. the bg fits well IMO.
she seems a bit grainy where there are shadows (just a bit....)
and she needs to be cleaned up a bit. try moving the text over a bit to the left.
the shadows are nicely done.
that's it for now.
good job. ^^
Foxxer
11-17-2004, 03:00 AM
I like it! Great color consistency, nice that the image is so large.
escaflownemoon
11-17-2004, 09:25 AM
Grainy..that's all I can think of.
Essex
11-17-2004, 10:06 AM
The eyes were pretty grainy... except that, it looks good
Xian Pu
11-17-2004, 11:21 AM
Grainy eyes? O.o I don't see it. As for the crapiness of the image itself. I don't get it. I save it in Photoshop, it gets grainy, but the image, when saved looks fine. I saved this one in Paintshop-- let's see if it turned out better or not. Son of a... anyone know of a way to stop that from happening? Stop the mushiness of the colors as it were?
It looks like she's hovering just above the surface.. and the text should be more visible..
Other than that... I think it looks good - simple and clean..<3
escaflownemoon
11-17-2004, 09:23 PM
well since I am using a laptop, if I lean a bit further I can see that its still grainy but its a pass, because nobody would stare at the screen about 5 inches away.
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