Naruto:: Gara :: Love Death What once was sand

[omicron_15]

Hmm decided to make use this pic that was laying around. I had to redraw the half of the hand and a bit of the knee on the assasin doll. Bg was made from stock photos.
http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/Gara_Love_Death_what_once_was_sand_R.jpg
Hmm Im unsure about the txt I feel its a bit too big. Tell me what you think.
fixed her hair a bit

[Suzuna]

I like the text juuust like it is. And all the extraction went well too. But the guy on the upper left.. blond guy.. his face needs a little cleaning up. The lines on everyone else are smooth but they're a little different on him so it's kind of disorienting.

[omicron_15]

its a girl... yea i cleaned it up some already....arg.....are you talking about the jaw line and the hair right hmmm let me see

are you talking about the darker clumps on the lines making up her hair poky?

[Suzuna]

Her hair doesn't bug me in particular, it's definitely the jawline.

[____]

yeah, it's the jawline.........

!!!! but it looks awesome!

one thing though....... the colors look kind of false and faded.

[MistressPookyChan]

hey there! long time no see.

The colors in the characters seem a bit faded. I would adjust the layers a bit to make them a tad darker. Also, next time, can you upload the wallpaper onto the forum so that it saves 56kers' time? Thanks! :)

[escaflownemoon]

I find it looks good. I would make the characters a bit darker and the text looks good to me...actually which text are you talking about that is too big..the chinese or the english or the japanese?

[MistressPookyChan]

I personally see nothing wrong with the text. in fact, it's some of the best use of text I've seen in a long time. it compliments the wallpaper, not distracts from it.

[Capish]

is that yours, have you done it by hand, if so then i onely have one word for it, and that word is:Masterpiece!!...woow..so coooool!!:)
Oh yeah, the text, no its fine, its cool, i like it just the way it is. please dont change it:)

[zerog]

yeah I agree... I see no problems with it honestly...

[Gouki]

that is great and very well done some spots on it look alittle faded though

[~Sakura Haruno~]

its very nice keep doin like that ^^