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Xian Pu
07-18-2004, 12:42 AM
http://www.ferricorp.com/anime/excel/bw01.jpg


The original scan. I tweaked the color spectrum in PSP for both the image and the BG, and think it came out really well. Anything need anything?

Foxxer
07-18-2004, 01:39 AM
Very nice job. It came out well.

Only suggestion I'd make would be to make the text the same dark brown color as the background ink, instead of black, to make it fit in a little better.

Well, okay, another suggestion - the complex background behind her head seems to compete with her for attention. What would it look like if you flipped the background horizontally?

Xian Pu
07-18-2004, 01:46 AM
How's this?

escaflownemoon
07-18-2004, 09:11 AM
My only concern is her jagged outline, other than that everything looks good.

nutcase
07-18-2004, 10:24 AM
other then the jaggedness,it looks great

Xian Pu
07-18-2004, 11:42 AM
She doesn't have a jagged outline. If you zoom in; it's very smooth. ^_^

escaflownemoon
07-18-2004, 12:35 PM
nope, I zoomed in and she still does along her left strip of hair and also some extraction bits are left over around her hair...

Seyia
07-18-2004, 01:07 PM
it looks fine Escaflowenmoon

escaflownemoon
07-18-2004, 05:41 PM
ok maybe its just computer..:lol: no worries then..:)

akachan
07-19-2004, 02:04 AM
beautiful!!!*_*
the hue is fantastic, and also the bg...
mmhh try to put a noise on the bg or over her...a old film or some filter like that ^-^

Candy-StarR
07-19-2004, 02:37 AM
I thought the outline was jaggy aswell :unsure:
But my main problem is the little white bits in her hair... ahh!
And, is the text meant to get lost in the background?

WeyrDragon
07-19-2004, 02:42 AM
i like it, even though it has no reflection on the zaniness of the anime :P

Xian Pu
07-19-2004, 03:31 AM
There. Got rid of the white specks in her hair, and yes the font is supposed to blend in with the BG. As for zaniness; well, the look on her face doesn't look too... crazy. More toned down and... Ropenmatsu 1 ish to me. If you remember; she was the no nonsense one. 2 was the crazier one. Hot Excel Ropenmatsu lesbian scene anyone? :D