View Full Version : Check Out The Modifications!!!

07-13-2004, 05:38 PM
if you need to know, i was offline over a month because of my isp. but i'm back!

and here's my new and modified wallpaper!

i have made 2 versions of it. tell me which one you like better, and what should i add/remove/modify. ok! :^_^:


07-13-2004, 05:43 PM
very good, just the scan on the right is too grainy/or smth, smooth it out :)

07-13-2004, 05:45 PM

07-13-2004, 09:56 PM
definitely the second one

07-14-2004, 10:07 AM
I didn't see the difference unless I wasn't looking in the right place. I think both but you should remove the right image of her and him. I think it looks good this time.

07-15-2004, 09:46 AM
agreed.. the image is really "cut out" and i cant spot the diff o.o

07-15-2004, 12:28 PM
it took me a while to spot the difference to, but if youll notice the second one has a ripple effect in the middle why the first one does not.

07-15-2004, 12:40 PM
I prefer it without the ripple effect, but I didn't notice the difference 'til you pointed it out.

The image of her/him in the lower right seems out of place because its colors don't match the color scheme of the rest of the wallpaper. Maybe make them monochromatic, the same blue that's used in the background?

I like what you've done with the text - the translucent Kenshin text, the wavy web site name.

07-15-2004, 02:18 PM
ahh I see it now.. I think its pointless to have the wavy stuff in the middle and also the two things in there. I think the first one is good. Just get rid of the lower right image..I said already ..:blinks:

07-15-2004, 04:12 PM
Totaly agree with escaflownemoon :^_^:

07-16-2004, 02:00 AM
:D thxs everybody for your comments! :)

the people have spoken, changes will be made :^_^:

07-17-2004, 08:34 PM
i didn't mention that about a week ago i had to format my PC because a malicious program messed up the master boot record of my windows installation. i lost all my data, including the .psd files of my wallpapers :angry: . thankfully my friend had a jpeg of my second wp in her site (bdragon.ho8.com check it out!), and she sent it to me. so yeah, i had to do the changes on the jpg :(. which sucked!

anyways, here it is:

07-20-2004, 04:13 AM
so um... did anybody like it? at least see it!? :unsure:

07-20-2004, 05:44 AM
Looks good!

07-21-2004, 02:51 AM

but i was kind of expecting some post from all of you who criticized my wp... it's been over 4 days now! :unsure: doesn't anyone care anymore? :(

07-21-2004, 10:01 AM
We care (I think) ..just some probably forgot or don't know what to say like me..

Xian Pu
07-21-2004, 12:51 PM
Thing is that I gave my critique (I think) last time you uploaded this, nothing much has changed since then with this wallpaper. It's gotten better no doubt, but... Eh. It's a good wallpaper.

07-21-2004, 02:20 PM
well, technically we all come to get our wallpapers critiqued here right?

what for? sinple, to get the honor of having it on aw.com!

so my question is pretty simple! *as my wp is now, is it aw.com material?*
if not, what can i do to make it aw.com material! :huh: