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Xian Pu
07-11-2004, 11:42 PM
Found this really great scan of Naru and Shinobu and had to do something with it. I personally like the way it turned out myself. Suggestions, thoughts?

Obsidian Joy
07-12-2004, 12:11 AM
Very good :D

escaflownemoon
07-12-2004, 09:07 AM
Looks very warm. I like it. You chose a good red. Not hard on the eyes. Good Job. The extraction looks good to me. Well done.

Foxxer
07-13-2004, 12:00 AM
That's really good! Neat ruby shade of red!

The only thing that doesn't seem right to me is the text. Neat font, but maybe it's a touch too crisp? Is there anything else interesting you can do with the text?

How'd you make the nice background, by the way?

Raven
07-13-2004, 12:57 AM
Wow, looks nice. 2 things though: theres a wee little bit of white on the bottom on the black-haired one's uhh, black hair. you know, there *points* near the nape of the neck. and theother: I really like the bg. buuutt..maybe blur it, just a little bit. smoot out that noise filter (assuming thats what you used.
Other than that. I like. :)

Xian Pu
07-13-2004, 01:18 AM
How's this?

Raven
07-13-2004, 01:31 AM
Beautiful!

however, upon closer examination, theres a green line through the middle of the image. and a little bit of white on the bottom part of the hair on the brown-haired one's..hair. :P

Xian Pu
07-13-2004, 02:36 AM
I think the green line is your monitor bro, as for the white around Naru's hair, I'll fix it.

MuZ0NaZ
07-13-2004, 06:09 AM
the 2nd one is way better; maybe try lightening the bg in middle-left(shinobu) and bottom-right(naru) - they seem 'floating' there, but thats just me :ph34r: otherwise, it's very nice :)

escaflownemoon
07-13-2004, 08:45 AM
It looks good to me. Nope there is no green line.

nutcase
07-13-2004, 09:16 AM
exCellENT wall paper. and there is no green line..

Xian Pu
07-14-2004, 01:35 AM
How'd I make it? Trade secret. :P I'll share my how to fix tips but not my how I did it tips. Remember that a magician never lets the audience know how he did a trick. ;) Sorry.

Obsidian Joy
07-14-2004, 11:46 AM
I see a green line too its a little under the purple haired girls mouth. But other than that its awesome!!

Xian Pu
07-14-2004, 12:04 PM
Nope. Still don't see it. Gotta be your monitor... Especially if you think Shinobu has purple hair. She's got black hair bro.