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Xian Pu
06-15-2004, 06:17 AM
It's really simple, but I feel that adding too much to the background would... not be cool. I don't know how to explain it other than it feels like it's right. Suggestions are always welcome as I am always looking to improve my work. :D

escaflownemoon
06-15-2004, 10:56 AM
it looks pretty good. It might be a bit plain on the left side though..^^

_hades the wicked
06-15-2004, 11:36 AM
I don't like that white paper-like thing where she's on... It cuts the "flow" of the wall...
I like the background on the left side though, and the font.

Seyia
06-15-2004, 08:29 PM
ummm. well it look's okay

Xian Pu
06-16-2004, 12:18 AM
How's this? Got rid of the white entirely and moved her over a little. Better?

[EDIT] Had to fix her hair.

_hades the wicked
06-16-2004, 09:15 AM
Looks greatly better, I'm just not too fond of the shadow below her.

Xian Pu
06-16-2004, 02:28 PM
Shadow gone.

_hades the wicked
06-16-2004, 05:02 PM
Now it's better. No more changes in my opinion =)