Sentimental Graffiti

[escaflownemoon]

Here it is..I was wondering how I can make the string of the bow to be not really jagged?

anybody got any ideas?

Open to suggestions.

[Candy-chan]

just use the line tool and pass over it.

also, theres a jaggy-not-pretty thing in the sky, on the left, care to fix that?

[escaflownemoon]

ok Candy-C thanks for the tip to make the line straighter.

updated: fixed jagged lines in both places.
opinions and suggestions are welcomed. ^^

[Candy-StarR]

nice colours :^_^:
...um, the string on the bow kinda goes funny when it's about to hit the top and bottom of the screen
and there's a bit of leftover extraction at the bottom on her hair aswell

[escaflownemoon]

^^ I don't know I put a smart blur only on the string that is on the bottom...and I cleaned up the extraction that you said I have missed around her hair..I think I caught all of it..

What do you guys think of it now? :P :^_^:

[akachan]

u should fix her arm...can u make a better grass?just make some grass lines behind, then gaussian blur them and make another grass line in front of it not blurred.try and tell me if it's ok ;)

[half_breed]

it looks like there is a bit of the thingy left above HER left arm. form extracting. besides that it looks good

[escaflownemoon]

ok I made more grass..I hope I got what you were saying akachan and I tried to fix the arm I hope it looks better.

What do you guys think of it now? :)

[Totchikins]

There's still just a little bit left, on the arm. It's a great wallpaper, though.

[akachan]

yes you got it totally! :^_^: perfect grass!
I agree with Totchikins about the arm; just another thing: there's a piece of hair just under the string and near to her face, the little hair above the larger one, and "some" hair above the string that should be fixed( it's like is it interrupted)
it's near to be perfect!! :)

[escaflownemoon]

akachan, can you show me where I missed about the hair because I don't see it the way you described it..just circle it or arrow it..plz. :)

[Miko]

It looks great so far, but I feel it could use some textures in the background - just to balance the fact that it's a manga image.

[escaflownemoon]

ok I added some kind of texture not sure if it fits..
but here it is..

[Miko]

Nu, that took away the details, and looks kinda filtered....hmm, I dunno.

[akachan]

I don't see it the way you described it..just circle it or arrow it..plz.
I can't :( this is university pc and there isn't any graphic program...
anyway I apologize for my english :(
I mean the pieces of hair under/above the arrow on the up/right

[DDR Pip]

I liked before the texturing better, but the bottom of the bow string seems to go transparent or fade off or something. BTW, this is an awesome wallpaper.

[escaflownemoon]

thanks all, I also like the bg without texture..I really don't know what kind of texture would fix so any suggestions are still welcome..just gotta direct me to the right source. ^^