A Vash Wallpaper

[vegasect]

Well here is a trigun wall I created awhile back and I was wonder if you can give me a few tips. All suggestions welcome.

[GangstaKermit]

Hm. I would take off the right pic (and that lighting effect) and concentrate on the midle one. And the text needs some more work.

I think that it can become a good grunge wp :)

[Cyberhunter]

Also move down your signature so it can be hidden behind the task bar...

[Foxxer]

With the red pixels on a black background, and the schmaltzy-looking fonts, it looks kinda like something made in MS Paint. ;)

The border works... get rid of the guy on the right and the lens flare, make the guy in the middle less translucent (bring him to the foreground), don't use so many different clashing fonts (find a font that blends better, the one that says 'VASH THE STAMPEDE' looks neat), and that'll help it a lot, I think!

[escaflownemoon]

what Foxxer said already and lose some of the text..like the middle one or if you do want to keep it I think it should be one with the bg rather than in front of Vash. The lens flare needs to go..:) Other than that I see a good future for it.

[vegasect]

ok thank you i will get workin on it soon bad thing is i dont have a project save or save before some of the major changes on it so i might have to make a new one using the given ideas.

[vegasect]

oh and about the lens flare, I know they are chessy , but it was only for the gun, but if that guy goes than so does the lens flare so it works out I guess.