View Full Version : Gothic Style

06-03-2004, 05:17 PM
I dont think I ever made a wallpaper so fast...........
Anyway, opinions and suggestions are welcome.........

06-03-2004, 06:09 PM
I think the words that's written on her should be brought behind her..I think it will look better and add some pink/ purple in the wallpaper..just slightly everywhere to have some feel to it.

06-03-2004, 06:33 PM
put text behind her and gave the background a dark purple color....
hope this is better.......

06-03-2004, 08:42 PM
its nice. but the chunk of text right behind her is capting attention and shouldnt. Do something to it...

whos that girl from?

06-03-2004, 09:27 PM
its not from anything, its original art made by somebody(wouldnt know who the site is in another language)
so anyway, I got rid of the text behind her.............

06-04-2004, 12:38 AM
I thought she was a floating head and shoulders until I noticed the body faintly beneath her. It would be nice if her body stood out just a little better.

Xian Pu
06-04-2004, 03:03 AM
I dunno, I kinda like the floating bodiless head and shoulders look myself. It adds allure to the background. *shrug* My only gripe is that it now seems a bit empty. How about a gradient glow, or soft focus to the character and fade it out as it goes down? I think that it would help to define her and make it feel less empty.

06-04-2004, 03:30 AM
nice work! really! mmhh...try to move her a little bit to the left, maybe enlarging her too...and the text that was on her, you can put it into the centre (of the bg)fading it a bit...or you can add a verse from a dark poetry or song.. :blink: :rolleyes: keep the good work!

06-04-2004, 08:09 AM
made her a bit bigger, maybe that'd make up for the emptyness.
If there's still something that should be done tell me, I want this wallpaper to be perfect B)

06-04-2004, 08:18 AM
you're near to do so! I don't know why..but I really love this one ^_^ *goes to akachan favourite walls*
there's a thing you can work with(I think)..see the cross on her "glove"?it's beautiful! try to put something like that behind her(it should be also quite easy to do with vector lines, if u don't have a graphic table).like she is in a church with this cross, or something else ,but remind to keep her the main theme of the wall..
as I've said, in alternative (?) u can put a simple purple sentence :)

06-04-2004, 03:58 PM
added some light text behind her.........

06-04-2004, 04:16 PM
Hm, the last one is the best so far :)

Hm, I kinda see green color behinde that new text in the last one. Duno if it's only my monitor.

06-04-2004, 04:47 PM
cant see it anywhere, probably the monitor

06-04-2004, 06:23 PM
now whats bothering me is the piece of text on the left side....it looks cut off from the big slice

06-04-2004, 06:51 PM
any better?
Made the text bigger and got rid of the text on the left.........

06-05-2004, 03:09 AM
don't know why, I can't see the pics. maybe my PC only..

06-05-2004, 09:44 AM
well the pics are about 500kb each. Give it some time to load.

06-05-2004, 06:56 PM
no green wizzy but I see some red like around her head..

This last one is best looking. Keep it up:)

06-05-2004, 07:04 PM
I still see green color. Maybe because I have a high contrast LCD.

Sorry to use this, but I've increased a bit the contrast of your wp, do u see now that green spot?

06-05-2004, 07:10 PM
oh yes I see it now with the high contrast effect. So why don't you try lowering the contrast of your LCD screen to see if you still see green.

06-06-2004, 10:33 AM
now I see it, and damn did it hurt my eyes! :lol:
Anyway, I dont think there is anything I could do about that..........