Some Rk Wallpapers (my Firsts)

[Raven a.k.a K&K]

Erk, new and completely clueless. I sent these five wallpapers to submit@animewallpapers.com, but I'm itching to see if they're good enough, your opinions would help. I don't have paintshop, just my scanners default program, microsoft pictureIt. I'll post a few up now and a few later. They're all RK related with either K&K themes or K&T themes.

They are attached to my lower post, please scroll down to see them.

[Chaotix]

Originally posted by Raven a.k.a K&K@May 29 2004, 11:54 AM
Erk, new and completely clueless. I sent these five wallpapers to submit@animewallpapers.com, but I'm itching to see if they're good enough, your opinions would help. I don't have paintshop, just my scanners default program, microsoft pictureIt. I'll post a few up now and a few later. They're all RK related with either K&K themes or K&T themes.


No Words (http://home.ripway.com/2004-4/101481/nowords.jpg)


Reason (http://home.ripway.com/2004-4/101481/Reason.jpg)
~Same as top, just with lyrics inserted
Personally.. and I'm not an erxpert here, but I prefer the one with no words. The words look to me to fill it up and draw attention away from your amazing wall..

[Raven a.k.a K&K]

Yes, the no words was my personal favorite, but I had to make one with words tah give credit to the song that gave me the idea to create this in the first place ^_^ I'm happy someone enjoys it.

[Xian Pu]

Why not uploading it here instead of linking to your webspace. Right now, I'm getting an error message stating you've gone over your bandwidth. So, uh, yeah why not upload it here instead?

[Raven a.k.a K&K]

Oh, thank you for the tip...

[Raven a.k.a K&K]

Second one...

[NebbyTheEX-Parrot]

Thos're pretty good considering all you had to work with was Picture It and they're your firsts. However, the colors seem kind of washed out and there doesn't really seem to be a real focus to them. I'd leave the background image and remove the others, you really only need one. Also the one on the left is majorly squashed.

[Raven a.k.a K&K]

Washed out? What do you mean by that? I do see your point with the focus. The two other 'non-background' pics aren't really 'needed' in the no words, but I added them to better relate to the lyrics on the second version.

[Seyia]

I like the second one better

[escaflownemoon]

I like the first version. I like it washed out like that considering it kinda gives a ancient japanese feeling to the wall but yea you should really have one image to be the focus and the rest is not necessary needed bit can be included but you should fade it out.

[NebbyTheEX-Parrot]

It means the colors are very faded, but if you did them like that on purpose and like it like that then forget what I said about them.

[Foxxer]

The first one looks okay - maybe a little overcomplicated, 'cos you've got one large faint head superimposed on two pieces of clip art beside another piece of clip art. It looks a bit too busy.

On the second one, the words ruin it. It looks like you just picked a dramatic-sounding poem and a dramatic-looking font and added a dramatic shadow to it; it's too plain and too long and too hard to read. It would be a lot more powerful if you picked a small part of it to showcase on this wallpaper, and found some interesting way to display it.