Noir

[Xian Pu]

I dunno, does it seem a bit plain? Or is it fine the way it is? I'm not one hundred percent sure either way.

[escaflownemoon]

I think you should make the character side more darker in the bg because the girls face is looking serious land ooking over to the other side like there is something...it's a mystery sorta type deal. :)

[onslaught2029]

I agree, also a shadow under the ladies would look nice

[Xian Pu]

How's this?

Oh, incidently, I changed the color of the lettering because it would otherwise blend into the background.

[Ashe]

The background coloring and texture looks better in the second one.

The girl that is standing still has white bits on her legs. Mostly between her legs actually. The 'Noir' text is a bit jagged. Try and smooth it out some.

[Xian Pu]

Well, I can't seem to figure out how to make the edges of Noir unjagged. Suggestions as to the how would be cool. Anyway, removed the white spots.

Forgot to add the shadow back. >_<

After speaking to my cousin, who knows a little something something about French, I changed the inflection. IE Babel Fish strikes again. It&#39;s more proper this way.