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chus_ki
06-10-2011, 07:40 PM
Hello,

In this link:
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/naruto/alive.htm

The correct order of the lines to respect the rap is this:


dare datte shippai wa suru nda
hazukashii koto janai
kono kizu o muda ni shinai de
waratte arukereba ii

(RAP)
sou shizuka na kuuki suikomi
hiroki sora ni kao age tobikomi
toki ni ame ga futtara hito yasumi jaa
yukusaki wa kaze fuku mama ni
takusan no matotteru koukai
kono kizu o muda ni shicha shounai
ude ni kunshou kizami ikoukai shougai
sou kokkara ga Show Time

ah iroasete kono PORA
naka de ikiteru kako no jibun toka
itsumo TSURU nde hi no nai you ni
ibasho mitsukete hiataru you ni
konna kanji de hibi kattou
ippo fumidasu beki ganbou
makkou shoubu jibun ni muke issou
koko de kono uta hibikasou

dare datte shippai wa suru nda
hazukashii koto janai
kono kizu o muda ni shinai de
waratte arukereba ii

(RAP)
kyou hajimari o tsugeru asayake
yume to genjitsu no hazama de What's Say
kono koe kareru sono hi made
korogari tsudzukeru Another Day
shuppotsu shinkou
kamase in o
shindou kaitaku michi ippon yeah
yagate toori ni hanasake
soshite mirai ni mugete habatake
genjitsu omoku nokkaru ga
mezase chouten Like a No Culture
saru ga saru ni shikanarenai Oh
jibun wa jibun ni shikanarenai Yo
asu o ki ni shite shita muku mae ni
kyou no jibun no ki no muku mama ni
saisei kyou wa chou kaisei
nanimo nayami nankanaize


omoku no shikakaru genjitsu ga
ima no boku o semetateteru
kantan ni wa ikanai na
sonna koto kurai chouchi shiteru yo

dare datte shippai wa suru nda
hazukashii koto janai
kono kizu o muda ni shinai de
waratte arukereba ii
takusan no koukai o matotte
aji no aru hito ni naru sa
kanashimi mo kaze ni kaete
tsuyoku susunde ikereba ii


(RAP)
sou shizuka na kuuki suikomi
hiroki sora ni kao age tobikomi
toki ni ame ga futtara hito yasumi jaa
yukusaki wa kaze fuku mama ni
takusan no matotteru koukai
sono kizu o muda ni shicha shounai
ude ni kunshou kizami ikoukai shougai
sou kokkara ga Show Time

Regards

AzureDark
06-11-2011, 12:34 PM
You're only rearranging the rap lines, which will affect the flow of the existing translation since it needs to follow the number of lines of the translit. The kanji sheet is actually shorter than the current one which makes things more compact too, so I say rather than stretching it in line with your rearrangement, or condensing it to follow the kanji, I'll leave it because of the t/l.