Tenchi Wp!

[WinterC_16]

ive neva made a wp for any of the tenchi sagas so here we go! its of washu nd it pretty simple so what do u guys think? i got 2 versions

[WinterC_16]

version 2

[acamori]

i like it better with out the squares, they seem to put too much emphasis on the text. also, maybe see if you can make the drawing of washu a little darker (like increase the contrast so the lines are darker, but the white is still white) and i think it'll look better.

[Candy-chan]

V1 is better
aki-kun is right, play with the levels a bit. oh and try something on the text so it could look sketchy...i dunno what filter

[gadgetgirl16]

i like the one with the squares.....and did u drew that drawling? its good ^_^

[escaflownemoon]

I like the first version but the second is good too but you either darken the character a bit or lighten the squares. Right now the squares are drawing way too much.

[WinterC_16]

ive made washu darker, it looks a lot better thanx everyone :)

w/o boxes

[WinterC_16]

o yeah i almost forgot heres the version with boxes, with the boxes there is more to the wp nd it puts emphasis on the text. yet the other version is simple nd it is a iece of simple b&w fan art (not my btw :P ) im so confused idk which one

o nd i made4 the lines of the scetch darker on both new versions :^_^:

[Candy-StarR]

personally i like the very first one... looks nice

[GangstaSnail]

Hm, prefere the one w/o the boxes.