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Megami-chan
01-22-2011, 09:45 AM
hello! I would like to correct the romaji lyrics Myself ..

Doushite doushite suki nan darou
Konna ni namida afureteru

Ano koro wa ushinau mono ga oosugite nani mo utaenakatta
Sukoshi hanareta basho soko ga watashi no ibasho datta

Kimi no hitomi no oku ni ano hi samishisa wo mitsuketa
Futari niteru no kana?
Kidzukeba itsumo tonari ni ite kureta

Doushite konna ni suki nan darou
Kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo
Ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
Tooku hanarete wakatta yo

Nakinagara sagashitsudzuketa maigo no kodomo no you ni
Kedo soko ni wa eien nante aru wake nakute

'Dare mo shinjinakereba ii n da yo' tsubuyaita ne
Futari niteta no kana?
Ano toki kimi wo mamoru to kimeta noni

Doushite omoide ni dekinai n darou
Toosugite chikasugite todokanai yo
'Wasureyou' tte omoeba omou hodo
Kimi ga ookiku natteku yo

Doushite konna ni suki nan darou
Kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo
Ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
Tooku hanarete wakatta yo

Doushite kimi wo suki ni natta n darou
Kantan sugite kotae ni naranai

I hope to have been of help!

animeyay
01-22-2011, 10:25 AM
You'll need to provide a link to the song. Highlighting the corrections would also be helpful. =)

Megami-chan
01-22-2011, 10:51 AM
Ops sorry!



you wrote (corrections)


doushite doushite suki nan darou
konna ni namida afureteru

ano koro ha ushinau mono ga oosukite nani mo utaenakatta
sukoshi hanareta basho soko ga watashi no ibasho datta

kimi no hitomi no oku ni ano hi samishisa wo mitsuketa
futari niteru no kana?
kitsukeba itsu mo tonari ni ite kureta

doushite konna ni suki nan darou
kimi no koe kanshii hodo hibiiteru yo (Kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo)
ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
tooku hanarete wakatta yo

nakinagara sagashi tsuduketa maigo no kodomo no you ni
kedo soko ni ha eien nante aru wake nakute

"dare ni mo shinjinakereba iin da yo" tsubuyaita ne ('Dare mo shinjinakereba ii n da yo' tsubuyaita ne)
futari niteru no kana? (Futari niteta no kana?)
ano toki kimi wo mamoru to kimeta no ni

doushite konna ni suki nan daro (Doushite omoide ni dekinai n darou)
toosugite chikasugite todokanai yo
"wasureyou" tte omoeba omou hodo
kimi ga ookiku natteku yo

doushite konna ni suki nan darou
kimi no koe kanshii hodo hibiiteru yo (Kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo)
ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
tooku hanarete wakatta yo

doushite konna ni suki nan darou (Doushite kimi wo suki ni natta n darou)
kantan sugite kotae ni naranai


We understand better?

animeyay
01-22-2011, 11:06 AM
Okay, here's an example of how you should post corrections:


Full Moon wo Sagashite: Myself (http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/fullmoon/myself.htm)


doushite doushite suki nan darou
konna ni namida afureteru

ano koro ha ushinau mono ga oosugite nani mo utaenakatta
sukoshi hanareta basho soko ga watashi no ibasho datta

......
......


(You need to provide a link to the original song, and also to make things easier for us you should put your corrections in a format that'll stand out, e.g. BOLD font or UNDERLINE.)

Megami-chan
01-22-2011, 11:10 AM
okay! Next time I will do exactly as you said!
I wanted to add that the translation should be accurate even though the words were wrong!

animeyay
01-22-2011, 11:14 AM
Sounds good, so could you bold or underline your corrections, please?

Also, what about the translation you said?

Megami-chan
01-22-2011, 12:02 PM
Full Moon wo Sagashite: Myself

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/fullmoon/myself.htm


doushite doushite suki nan darou
konna ni namida afureteru

ano koro ha ushinau mono ga oosukite nani mo utaenakatta
sukoshi hanareta basho soko ga watashi no ibasho datta

kimi no hitomi no oku ni ano hi samishisa wo mitsuketa
futari niteru no kana?
kitsukeba itsu mo tonari ni ite kureta

doushite konna ni suki nan darou
kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo
ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
tooku hanarete wakatta yo

nakinagara sagashi tsuduketa maigo no kodomo no you ni
kedo soko ni ha eien nante aru wake nakute

"dare mo shinjinakereba iin da yo" tsubuyaita ne
futari niteta no kana?
ano toki kimi wo mamoru to kimeta no ni

doushite omoide ni dekinai n darou
toosugite chikasugite todokanai yo
"wasureyou" tte omoeba omou hodo
kimi ga ookiku natteku yo

doushite konna ni suki nan darou
kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yo
ima made nani ga sasae datta ka
tooku hanarete wakatta yo

doushite kimi wo suki ni natta n darou
kantan sugite kotae ni naranai

the translation from romaji to English, but it's oddly appropriate, given the errors ..

animeyay
01-22-2011, 12:15 PM
Okay I've made the corrections.
I scanned through the translation, but didn't see any big problems.
Although, you're always welcome to point out any error you see. =)